replied to q's new track w/ black magic n debit... n the premation free..


aight i already posted this track as "wen we come around" w/ open third verse. but senser filled it in w/ tha quickness. his verse is allll freestyled..... and he still outshines me 100% lol... this is why ima redo my verse n tha hook. so im not lookin for too much feed as to my part, cuz ima redo it anyways. but lephT and sens ripped this. n its only fair for yall to peep...lol

www.soundclick.com/theomen

"when we come around" is the title...

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uh oh some major sleepers here omen..oh well they'll get ta hear it soon uppin this shits fire 1ne...

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^no doubt man... im used to tha sleepage by now tho.. u know.... but acuity IM'd me sayin he peeped it n was feelin it. sayin ur part was fireness.. soo yea u murdered this one sense lol

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u know dis...

aiight some real feed except : "OMEN yo, this SHIT IS FIYA..SENSER IS TOO DOPE" type AIM messages lmao

1)tight intro when ur talking....loose tha like gremlin mated with cruella daville bit..."main invent bit...twisted mofos bit" sounds wack n dont fit with whole dope vibe of beat

2)omen ur flow slips a lil...ur hella more lyrical than normal but still incorporating a lil more wordplay like da nasa bar...u say ur re-doing, id say drop ur fans a dope ass punchline of some sort..id say up ur delivery stick some anger in dat mofo....imagine ur talking to leady lmao...dope nonetheless

3)hook...real nice...needs a couple of adlibs or a layer of sumin else...also its a lil choppy dnt flow real...i reckon its real catchy....also...only overdub "when we come around" imo.

4)ya boy lepht of paypah rec right?....his mix is a lil low in volume...he got the arrogance on lock, typa arrogance id associate wid a black man tho...lmao @ crown line....basically his verse is kinda solid...needs a better mix and to change up his flow a lil wid a more angry delivery ta suit beat

5)awwwwwwwwwwwwwww shit....k da patented "senser motherfuuuuuuccckkker"..building anticipation....i basically aint buying this a freestyling, the flow is to nice 4 it to be....sense got the delivery locked and his adlibs r on point...multis flowing real nice...ya voice n flow jus merk dis mofockin beat...omen says u like 19? dayum

6) outro of accapella hook works well

In conclusion ---- omen n lepht need to up quality to tie in wid sense's or get sum1 illt a mix it all....this shit gon b FIRE when its finished i know it

PS - omen ima find us a beat 4 ma mixtape foo.....and yo Senser u need ta bless me wid a 16 on a track yo...also "we got next vol.1" when tha fuck dat gon drop


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good looks on the feed and yeah homie i free styled that verse asked omen i had it recorded and mix and sent back to him in no time...but as for the mixtape it should be done in no time like the end of Sept. just so you know homie this shit is fire...yall gon be in for a treat iight uppin this 1ne....

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and yeah fam im only 19 age aint nothin though be its how grown you are na'mean but holla at cha boi 1ne...

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heard this somewhere before, the freak show lol scary as fuck!, how do u make voices like that
the omen , u got a dope flow,quality is soso but pretty dope , chorus is iight, not very good seriously,
second verse is fucking dope, wow, lepht is fucking dope , now sensers verse is dope, nice voie, nice flow and nice everything lol, they only thing i dont like is the chorus but overall dope song

return the favor on my beat Trumpet Anthem in the rythmic con....u know the name lol

listening: beat is sick..

lol nice intro... ahh i hate it wen u do that voice thing with the high pitch.. ahh lol.. but the beat is sick.. flow is good.. delivery is tite.. lyrics is dope as always.. pretty good..
wtfeezy? whos this other person rapping??? who ever is in that verse got a nice voice for rap.. but yea lyrics is tite.. but yeah... the person in next verse has a very good flow, delivery is dope... but yeah next is sensers verse.. damn man.. seriously u effin dope as hell lol.. ur lyrics is good as hell.. delivery is amazing.. quality is good.. man surprised u aint on radio yet.. lol

overall: this is a dope song.. 8/10... but umm omen.. u sound almost same in every song lol

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