Aight Yo You Know Rulez THis Be My checKin.......

Ready SPit.....

you a small time bitch- you cant match up ta me/
you prolly anotha Tupac dickrider thats to blind ta see/
Biggie murdered Pac how im about ta murder you/
your like what i use ta whipe my ass wit./
you soft as tiss-ue/
when ya spit ya lyrics bout as hard as a limp dick./
your ryhmes so disgusting if i HAD ta hear another id get sick./
you to weak hearted ta go up against me./
Cause when i spit im a garunteed/
bitch you just a maybe./
muderous my dick- all youve killed is flies./
cause when i spit ya hear ohs/
when you spit ya hear sighs./
i hate goin up against rappas that aint worth it./
cause thats what you are - - you battlin against me its POINTLESS./
your ryhmes to sorry -- you try ta sell them theyd be WORTHLESS./
oh and just ta let ya know it was a white boi that just murk this./

New Style Now.......

[Opener]
I Leave This KId Crooked Worse THan Teeth That Need Braces.|
Compared To Me Sinner, Is Like No Feet In Marathon Races.||

[My Verse]

I leave this kid More Messed Up Then GuMS After Ten Packs Of Smoke.|
Then I Make Him Shake Like Havin A Siesure And Leave Him With The Stroke.||
This Kids Verse Is Unbelievebal Like Special Ed Kids Bein Gifted.|
If A Ghost Was Carryin Sinner He Still Wouldnt Be Lifted.||
Sinner Beatin Me..He Would Have A Better Chance Of Waitin Till Pigs Can Fly.|
His Verse Is More Whack Than The Girls Sayin U-G-L-Y U Aint Got No Alibi.||
Forget This Kid I Leave Him More Bruised Then The Color Black or Blue.|
Sinner Is Sayin To Himself "Sorry MM Im Sorry I Thought I Can Merk You".||
See This Kids Hopless..Even More Than Strobe Tryin To C This Progress.|
I bEt If This Kid Stole My Own Rhymes he Still Wouldnt Be Able To Impress.||
After THis I Make THis Kid White Than He Already Is.|(He says Hes White.)
I Make Sinner Feel Cooler Than Havin His First Kiss.||
Beginners Luck.....SInner I Guarantee It Wont Happen To You.|
He Gettin Stomped On...Worser Than A New Pair Of Large Shoes.||
See THis My New Style...No More Freakin Bolded Words.|
This Kid Look Stupid Now....Even More Stupid Then FuCkin NeRdZ.||

If U Didnt Get Last Line Nerds Look Stupid With There Pants Up Adn SHIZZ

alright, now just ta wait for votes ta come in...

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muderous mic got this. he had hotter punches. Sinner, ur flow was pretty off and ur rhymes were simple as fuck. muderous came with a ncie flow, some nice multies and nice punches, he got this

vote - muderous mic

return tha fava?

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124183

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MurDeROuS MiC RiPpEd like CraY-Zee

Break DOWN

Murderous

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches8/10
29/40

Gods Sinner

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 4/10
Structure 6/10
punches 5/10
20/40

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Murderous

Flow 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 9/10
33/40

Gods Sinner

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 7/10
punches 6/10
24/40

vote goes to Murderous because his verse was better overall......he had better punches along with better flow and eveyrthing else......you both need to keep elevating and then mabye you will be able to take on some vets sometime

Styll Uppin For This BAttle.....Will Return Favor......

Murderous

Flow 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 9/10
33/40

Gods Sinner

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 7/10
punches 6/10
24/40
Vote murderouse...becuz of a few things...includin the flows....they
was more better though.....But both did very good with the metas...
balance was ok so was the complexity leavin it very understandable...both
do alot of things and keep elevatin
v/mic

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return the favor mic = against popa doc in front lines

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Thnx For Votes Still UPPIN WILL RETURN FAVOR.....