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8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 05-28-05 at 09:49 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

DoggyDogg69 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 09:30 PM.

U know I’m going to scare u for life and you cant go into leave public//
20 years from now you’ll look back on this day, and change the subject//
And I’m going to love it, you clam u come harder//
You say u the best at sex, now all u need is a partner//
Yo I am merking you but that aint the only reason why your pissed//
Hell I’d be mad to, if I couldn’t find my dick//
I really hate to do this, but damn im having fun//
looks to me like not only the good die young//

(Finisher)
cause damn, u want to know the difference between u and me//
2 things, raw verbal talent....& puberty//

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§ick§eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 09:44 PM.

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gluck man, nice rap lol

uppin no.1 boiz.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................

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jea son lol uppin this shit lets get some votes in

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Voted For: §ick§eed

took this one. With better structure, harder disses and wayy better punches.

doggy- you're punches werent landing that hard, and i didnt see too much consistency in ur verse. i think you should elevate alot, then you'll be on tha potential level ....no hate. ur structure and flow was off.

sick-complete opposite, your strucutre and flow was on point, and so was ur punches and disses. i think your opener was a lil weak, but you picked it up tha second bar, and after that to show some consistency in ur verse. i was feelin tha crack head lines. showed some creativity, and lack of played concepts. i just think you had tha overall better verse.

overall- sick took this one wit more skill and intelligence in his verse. also he had wayy better flow, punches, structure, and disses.


if you have an alias wit over 300 post, RTF on battle link in sig...other wise, its coo. and I see you have some potential, so when you get in another battle, drop the 2 battle links in the Livin Legendz tryout thread..Our forum is located in crews and collaborations. new crews. then livin' legendz..i'll be lookin for you homie. you got potential...no hate doggy...oh, and you also have a wack name...good battle sick..you took this one...


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aight uppin vote no.1 peepz........................

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Voted For: §ick§eed

Yo Diz Wuzza No Contets, 2 EZ...............

Not Hating On U Dawgy! But He Wuz Killin It, Seed Had Dem Killer Punchez, Jus Look Yall...........

fuckin coke addict...sniffed medusa...his nose harder than stone statues
fagget you, might wanna let go ya dick before ur charged wit jerk-abuse
heard about doggy...he used to "rape chuckie" as a rubber fetish hobby
raise ur shotty.....he has less of a chance to "beat" me than "tinas body"
why u always holdin mens hands? date aids....and get wit da program
doggy usually smokes crack on planes with Whitney to get a dope land
everytime he came around in da hood....niggas threw him in trash cans
always suckin dick fag, moms fed u meat...no wonder dis cock-spams!
n gotdamn, doggy impregnated asses...havent u heard of trojan's man?

Dat, Vs..

U know I’m going to scare u for life and you cant go into leave public//
20 years from now you’ll look back on this day, and change the subject//
And I’m going to love it, you clam u come harder//
You say u the best at sex, now all u need is a partner//
Yo I am merking you but that aint the only reason why your pissed//
Hell I’d be mad to, if I couldn’t find my dick//
I really hate to do this, but damn im having fun//
looks to me like not only the good die young//

No Haste 2 Dawgy, Da Openenr Wuz Iight Frum DawgyDawg, But Seedz Whole Verse Wuz Much More Complex Wit Da Wordplay & Punz, He Haz 2 Get Mah Vote..

Plz Return Da Vote Yall, In Mah Signature

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Justt lookin at the polls He in ma crew ...................................

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

Voted For: §ick§eed

easy vote here.........

sick cam with harded and better punches...nice flow, and pretty good structure..... just try to use more original concepts..

doggy, your styles too "newbie"... ......../......./ looks shit and you need to learn how to throw proper punches... no hate but your verse was mainly fillers.

no hate, jus elevate....

RTF in sig so i dont have to DQ this vote.

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thanx for tha votes.......i cant vote on most of yall shit cuz i have like 20 posts.....when i can i will tho

vote!

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check the links in mah sig...im sur one just requires ova 20 posts... good lookin..

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