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01-17-04, 06:47 PM
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"Catch Me If You Can" new in 14 months
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Beat: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=845173&q=Hi
Hook: Catch me if you can// cuz nigga im on tha run// (repeat 5x) Verse 1: Lemme tell how all stared// im wanted 4 ill rhymes// and wanted 4 ill crimes// take heat like Tech-9// jus 2 fun screw dimes// i jus did any rapper would do// take money, and chill wit ya crew// i aint come 2 see you// i aint come to please you// i jus came to see whatchu gon do// nigga im bitter// but im not a quitta// im not patient to pull tha trigga// be careful you'll tha light// thats tha end of ya heartbeats// cause u cant see me// like when endz meets// cause well see if you Catch Me if you can// Hook: Catch me if you can// cuz nigga im on tha run// (repeat 5x) Verse 2: Im still on tha run// killed some niggaz runnin they mouth// i shot em, no doubt// stop cryin and and dont add a lil poubt// jus dont run yo mouth// or you'll end up like them other niggaz did// jus like 50 i aimed for they headz// and lay there in they bedz// but im still on tha run// bein a felon is kinda fun// jus wish i could hav honey bun// my buddy whinnin down// when we come through niggaz back down// im not funny not no clown// stand up to me?// lazy nigga is quik to back down// but Catch Me If You Can// Hook: Catch me if you can// cuz nigga im on tha run// (repeat 5x) spoken: Police can't find me!! To busy sittin on they fat greasy asses!! CATCH IF YOU CAN!! Verse 3: now im at tha end of line// im runnin out of time// gotta think of a plan// no more bulletz left in the Tech-9// im traped in a alley// no escape// heartbeats raise// im behind enemy lines// 1,2,3 (gunshots)// they still ain't catch me// oh well i guess this story ends// Catch If You Can// Hook: Catch me if you can// cuz nigga im on tha run// (repeat 5x) forget everyone who disses me. any God can judge me. FUCK U HATERS!! Last edited by Benz Quik : 01-17-04 at 06:51 PM. |
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01-18-04, 02:40 AM
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This was alright i thought.....since it was for audio structure dont really matter....probably would sound better in audio i think....but i think you could have used some multies in this to make it better....but keep at it and keep elevating.
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01-19-04, 03:49 PM
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IP:
i feel ya man. i been gone 14 month so i lil rusty, i keep reel though.so i'll take that as good thing
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01-31-04, 01:24 PM
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IP:
this was iight. With the beat it made it better. extend your bar length. You'll get better. Elevate more.
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