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01-25-08, 06:30 PM
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I don't lose
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my BEST song of 2008
IP: 790A CE6C
yep....cuz its my only song of 2008 so far...ha yea check it out still n give me some of your opinions....
lil shit i did for the ladies SIN WITH YOU - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=6206541 ill return any feed if any of yall still want feed on shit
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 well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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01-28-08, 12:29 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: 790A CE6C
no hate, no praise, no suggestions for improvement......
damn i cant get shit
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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01-28-08, 01:05 AM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: A296 9D25
I got you man. I'm listening right now.....
I like the beat. It's different. Did it come with the "I want it, you want it like that" sample in it or did you put it in there? I think you could have done a little better on the quality matching to be honest with you. The sample and your vocals were too different to me. On the positive note though, I like this track. The whole concept was nice, I just think you could have taken more time on the production of the track. The hook could stand out more too, but that goes in to the production 
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01-28-08, 01:23 AM
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I made it and il end it
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IP: 8EB7 EC88
Right no hate bro, i like the beat and your chorus is probably perfect serious.
But your verses did'nt fit with the track in anyway. Length of track is perfect too. Nothing really wrong with lyrics to be honest, but they do have to be adjusted slightly and maybe, well definately brought forward in alot different way of how the chorus is. This could and probably will be an excellent track, jus make those adjustments and your there! Easier said then done but make sure you do it. PEACE good stuff and keep it riseing WORD. |
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01-28-08, 02:06 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: 790A CE6C
haha enygma....that wasnt a sample....it was what i wrote
got my one friend to sing it....n i sang the guy part....no samples all music....i can understand what your sayin with the mixing tho.... the speakers i have at the moment are colored so nothing turns out the way i want it....ima def re do the mixing when i head back to my place at school
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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01-30-08, 03:11 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 0BB0 0DDC
up??????????????
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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01-30-08, 03:46 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 8A8E B507
Word man.....I listened to this again last night and I liked it a lot. I downloaded it and put it up on the OYD myspace shit. I'm gonna try to revamp that shit a little
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01-30-08, 09:45 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 0BB0 0DDC
word
speaking of re-vamp.... wunna do a track together again?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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01-31-08, 04:57 PM
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L.E
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IP: DBA9 C526
Pretty good shit man.
Had some Superman kind of vibe to it...decent. Wasn't feeling the delivery as much, but it was fitting for the track...you just kinda sounded bored, but it was good. Hook was nice...good shit man. Keep it up. |
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