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King Solo 5 100.00%
-UNF- 0 0%
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Old 09-06-05, 11:08 AM   #1
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From: On Road !!!
-UNF- vs King Solo

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3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO

1 day check 1 day drop

weeeeeeerd good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-07-05 at 11:08 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO
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Old 09-06-05, 12:27 PM   #2
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Old 09-06-05, 12:35 PM   #3
King Solo
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Battlin’ UNF, truth is I’m scared, I mean yea I want this bitch gone
But I’m afraid if I whoop his ass……he just might get a stiff one
Fuck workin on ya verses kid, ya still gone be a bottom scraper
Cuz I’ll serve U ‘n’ F and I don’t mean grading ya paper
Get at this bitch, really I’d just be settin’ myself up for a fall
Cuz I’d fuck with him ‘n’ shit,
………………But I hear UN likes to FUCK WID-A-BALL !! *
Choke UNF till he’s coffin(coughin) & bury him beneath ground
Cuz this kid ‘bleeds for music’……after I ‘lay a beat down’ **
Ayo man fuck devinchi, I’ll beat Leonardo’s ass all night
Fuckin shred this ninja turtle………ure the blue one right ??
UNF’s in TE, but kid ure just the mop ‘n’ bucket of the crew
So I’ll put you in your place after I wipe the floor with you.


* old name – un-fuck-widable
** Double meaning – lay a beat down (music wise) lay a beat down (fighting wise)
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Old 09-06-05, 12:46 PM   #4
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Old 09-06-05, 12:49 PM   #5
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K.ing's A Fag, Beating Strobe's Meat Is Your Thing Dude
I.ll Discuss How Whack You Are But You Did It For You
N.oticed Your Dropped Quick Pre Writing In Your Blood
G.uy's A "Chain Gang"..Fuck I'm Lying You Never Bin A Thug

S.o You Copy Right Your,Bitch No One Will Read It
O.r Whipe Your Ass With Awards An Don't Achieve Shit
L.ol Your Solo Guess The Saw Through This Savages Raps
O.h BTW Put The Mic Down Your Done Establish That As A Fact

if you dont get my punches dont fuckin vote.............-_-

good luck king uppin for sum votes bitches..........
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Old 09-06-05, 03:15 PM   #6
Vaskez
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Voted For: King Solo

K.ing's A Fag, Beating Strobe's Meat Is Your Thing Dude
I.ll Discuss How Whack You Are But You Did It For You
^^where did he do that? seems kinda fake to me
N.oticed Your Dropped Quick Pre Writing In Your Blood
G.uy's A "Chain Gang"..Fuck I'm Lying You Never Bin A Thug
^^weak IMO
S.o You Copy Right Your,Bitch No One Will Read It
O.r Whipe Your Ass With Awards An Don't Achieve Shit
^^kinda played, not bad flip
L.ol Your Solo Guess The Saw Through This Savages Raps
O.h BTW Put The Mic Down Your Done Establish That As A Fact
^^ok I spose

vs.


Battlin’ UNF, truth is I’m scared, I mean yea I want this bitch gone
But I’m afraid if I whoop his ass……he just might get a stiff one
^^bah, played concept, okish flip
Fuck workin on ya verses kid, ya still gone be a bottom scraper
Cuz I’ll serve U ‘n’ F and I don’t mean grading ya paper
^^not bad
Get at this bitch, really I’d just be settin’ myself up for a fall
Cuz I’d fuck with him ‘n’ shit,
………………But I hear UN likes to FUCK WID-A-BALL !! *
^^quite nice nameplay
Choke UNF till he’s coffin(coughin) & bury him beneath ground
Cuz this kid ‘bleeds for music’……after I ‘lay a beat down’ **
^^don't explain wordplay mid-verse (1st line) 2nd line is quite nice
Ayo man fuck devinchi, I’ll beat Leonardo’s ass all night
Fuckin shred this ninja turtle………ure the blue one right ??
^^heh kinda corny, but not too bad
UNF’s in TE, but kid ure just the mop ‘n’ bucket of the crew
So I’ll put you in your place after I wipe the floor with you.
^^kinda predictable after the set-up which lessened the punch, but still not bad

solid verse

no hate to UNF but he writes in a newbish style. King Solo takes this hands down
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Old 09-06-05, 03:29 PM   #7
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i know i was rushed but i dont normally come wid shit -_-
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Old 09-06-05, 03:32 PM   #8
King Solo
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......i come with diarrheoa muthafucka werd
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Old 09-06-05, 03:38 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for King Solo

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checkin pollz.............................................
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Old 09-06-05, 11:44 PM   #10
Spektikul
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Voted For: King Solo

No hate yall, your both my boys reppin T.E. Im just tryna help yall close this thing so here goes...

Solo

Battlin’ UNF, truth is I’m scared, I mean yea I want this bitch gone
But I’m afraid if I whoop his ass……he just might get a stiff one
Gay lines are played, this one was ok tho.
Fuck workin on ya verses kid, ya still gone be a bottom scraper
Cuz I’ll serve U ‘n’ F and I don’t mean grading ya paper
That hurt him bad, nice.
Get at this bitch, really I’d just be settin’ myself up for a fall
Cuz I’d fuck with him ‘n’ shit,
………………But I hear UN likes to FUCK WID-A-BALL !! *
Is this another gay line.
Choke UNF till he’s coffin(coughin) & bury him beneath ground
Cuz this kid ‘bleeds for music’……after I ‘lay a beat down’ **
Lmao. ouch again!!!
Ayo man fuck devinchi, I’ll beat Leonardo’s ass all night
Fuckin shred this ninja turtle………ure the blue one right ??
This wasnt too bad.
UNF’s in TE, but kid ure just the mop ‘n’ bucket of the crew
So I’ll put you in your place after I wipe the floor with you.
Hard closer, good show.

UNF

K.ing's A Fag, Beating Strobe's Meat Is Your Thing Dude
I.ll Discuss How Whack You Are But You Did It For You
I already used that Strobe line on him. lol.
N.oticed Your Dropped Quick Pre Writing In Your Blood
G.uy's A "Chain Gang"..Fuck I'm Lying You Never Bin A Thug
Didnt quite understand thins one. sorry.
S.o You Copy Right Your,Bitch No One Will Read It
O.r Whipe Your Ass With Awards An Don't Achieve Shit
Not bad, could have worded it better.
L.ol Your Solo Guess The Saw Through This Savages Raps
O.h BTW Put The Mic Down Your Done Establish That As A Fact
Good Closer.

[b]Overall I feel Solo took this one easily. No offense to my homie UNF, yours was ok but Solos top site material and shit, naw'mean? You will be too in time. Keep elevating, I have been seeing improvements each time yo. Good Job. And Solo...You had some hard ass punches up in that verse, cheers to you man, made me laugh. Peace homies.

V/Solo........................
 
Old 09-07-05, 01:08 AM   #11
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Voted For: King Solo

K.ing's A Fag, Beating Strobe's Meat Is Your Thing Dude
I.ll Discuss How Whack You Are But You Did It For You
^^^Ight Opener mixed wit a personal...nuthin special
N.oticed Your Dropped Quick Pre Writing In Your Blood
G.uy's A "Chain Gang"..Fuck I'm Lying You Never Bin A Thug
^^^ight personal....Punch REally didnt hit hard
S.o You Copy Right Your,Bitch No One Will Read It
O.r Whipe Your Ass With Awards An Don't Achieve Shit
^^^Nice line......
L.ol Your Solo Guess The Saw Through This Savages Raps
O.h BTW Put The Mic Down Your Done Establish That As A Fact
^^^Weak Closer......

Battlin’ UNF, truth is I’m scared, I mean yea I want this bitch gone
But I’m afraid if I whoop his ass……he just might get a stiff one
^^^Nice opener.....good punch
Fuck workin on ya verses kid, ya still gone be a bottom scraper
Cuz I’ll serve U ‘n’ F and I don’t mean grading ya paper
^^^Good personal.....
Get at this bitch, really I’d just be settin’ myself up for a fall
Cuz I’d fuck with him ‘n’ shit,
………………But I hear UN likes to FUCK WID-A-BALL !! *
^^^Hot Line.....i like this punch mixed wit the personal
Choke UNF till he’s coffin(coughin) & bury him beneath ground
Cuz this kid ‘bleeds for music’……after I ‘lay a beat down’ **
^^^Nice....hot double meanin this was a good line
Ayo man fuck devinchi, I’ll beat Leonardo’s ass all night
Fuckin shred this ninja turtle………ure the blue one right ??
^^^ight...line nuthin special
UNF’s in TE, but kid ure just the mop ‘n’ bucket of the crew
So I’ll put you in your place after I wipe the floor with you.
^^^Hot....CLoser....

V/King Solo......this was an ight battle i really felt unf could have came stronger......u had some good punchs but some that werent effective at all i seen better from u....No hate work on those things...King u came wit a hot verse u had consistent punchs that were mixed wit personals an wordplay.....solid verse that gets my vote....V/Solo
RTF......1
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Old 09-07-05, 02:52 AM   #12
Calypso
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Wow good battle, not enough posts to vote so just checkin the polls and leavin feedback

UNF-I like what you did incorporatin his name in your drop like that....thats pretty tight man...structure was on lock, some good punches, and overall nice drop

Solo-A lot of punches in ya verse...you came hard and didnt stop...nice personals..in my opinion you came a lot harder than UNF and this one should be yours =) good battle man
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Old 09-07-05, 03:00 AM   #13
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Voted For: King Solo

yo you owned this guy....

KING: you hella owned him you could have dropped one bar and you would have owned him...the name play line was wack....but your opener was prety creative and the lay a beat down line was prettyy dope..some of that wordplay you used was wack and your closer wasnt that good but then again niether was yoru oppenent so you win

UNF: yo YOU STOLE MY CONSEPT, when i battle king solo a long time ago....which makes you attempt not creative and its ela playe dout now, you focused to much on making that name shit ont he side and forgot to make your bars hit hard, if you would have pre written your verse and took longer on each line you would have had a chance

vote= king

can you please RTF
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