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Young Dollar 1 16.67%
.Barz Of Steel. 5 83.33%
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Old 06-01-05, 09:38 PM   #1
.Barz Of Steel.
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.Barz Of Steel. vs Young Dollar

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Old 06-01-05, 09:53 PM   #2
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Old 06-01-05, 09:54 PM   #3
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Come check in man!!!!!!!!!

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Old 06-01-05, 09:58 PM   #4
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Old 06-01-05, 09:59 PM   #5
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This kid's "garbage", all he is is talking "trash
But he aint hard, he "soft" as a "toddler's ass"
You'll get chopped in half, dawg I spit toxic waste
So you talk slick........................................
And get ya face "sliced" like "chocolate cake"
You're a lame emcee, ya barz is gay, its plain to see
So watch me "break dolla" like a "change machine"
Look dawg, you're pathetic, I got rhymes that defeat y'all
You try to answer, but "swing and miss".................
..............................like "crosseyed kids and tee-ball"
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Old 06-01-05, 10:02 PM   #6
Chris Stylez
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I'll Fix G clone, witta G tone,Got Stars to Kill, Who say they gonna merk me,
Sticks N stones, may break my bones, But Bars Of Steel Will never hurt me,

My style is unfuckable,i can be touch but not damageable
Ya ass say your untouchable,when you really very tangable

Try to bite my rhymes and ill show u that they very vemonist
Put a glock to ya crotch,Watch me sever ur only epididymis

You stay wit Manoply Bills, Jefferson Instead of Benjermins
Leave u with infertillity by hurting your valuble Vas Deferens

Bitch go fuck a bitch, cuz i know your jus an offical Lez
Homie gon spit the two letters of what ya initials says

Explanation:

If you dont know wat vas deferens is N epididymis go take health class and learn ya sex ed.....

his two letter initial is B.S. other words bull shit

ayo homie no hate after the battle N ups on ya Album cover
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Old 06-01-05, 10:14 PM   #7
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Nice verse homie

Lets get some votes on this motherfucker!!!!
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Old 06-02-05, 12:59 PM   #8
DeHotBwoy
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

.Barz Of Steel. More of makeing sense in his rhymes his structure is nice flow is of da chart and punches killed u Dollar i think he had better punches personals overall better verse to me so i think he deserves the vote
Young Dollar you're flow was weak punches we'erent there and personals u need to learn those son cuz they weak like crazy i think u should elavate V/ Barz of steel

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Old 06-02-05, 01:52 PM   #9
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Voted For: Young Dollar

Yo young dollar, this was hot.

Bars of Steel:

Grood drop, dissed him throughout. I like ure punched it hit hard homie.

You'll get chopped in half, dawg I spit toxic waste
So you talk slick........................................
And get ya face "sliced" like "chocolate cake"
You're a lame emcee, ya barz is gay, its plain to see
So watch me "break dolla" like a "change machine"

My favourite bit their in yours.

Yound Dollar:

Sick verse, jus beat him IMO, sick flow, sick punches all dat
Your whole verse was amazin, couldnt find a flaw homie, great drop.

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I'll Fix G clone, witta G tone,Got Stars to Kill, Who say they gonna merk me,
Sticks N stones, may break my bones, But Bars Of Steel Will never hurt me,

That cracked me up, YO Can YALL PLEASE RTF ON MY BATTLE WITH MURDZ AND/OR MY BATTLE WITH BIG DAWG, LINKS IN THE SIG......
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Old 06-02-05, 01:57 PM   #10
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

This kid's "garbage", all he is is talking "trash
But he aint hard, he "soft" as a "toddler's ass"

lol ok

You'll get chopped in half, dawg I spit toxic waste
So you talk slick........................................
And get ya face "sliced" like "chocolate cake"

Pretty simple analogy sorta hits

You're a lame emcee, ya barz is gay, its plain to see
So watch me "break dolla" like a "change machine"

Nice name personal and it hits

Look dawg, you're pathetic, I got rhymes that defeat y'all
You try to answer, but "swing and miss".................
..............................like "crosseyed kids and tee-ball"

Haha tight

VS

I'll Fix G clone, witta G tone,Got Stars to Kill, Who say they gonna merk me,
Sticks N stones, may break my bones, But Bars Of Steel Will never hurt me,

No i can see this but really what relevance does steel have to words and also if sticks hurt u im damn sure a bar of steel would kill u

My style is unfuckable,i can be touch but not damageable
Ya ass say your untouchable,when you really very tangable

Ok

Try to bite my rhymes and ill show u that they very vemonist
Put a glock to ya crotch,Watch me sever ur only epididymis

lol

You stay wit Manoply Bills, Jefferson Instead of Benjermins
Leave u with infertillity by hurting your valuble Vas Deferens

Stop with this conceptnow its not that nice

Bitch go fuck a bitch, cuz i know your jus an offical Lez
Homie gon spit the two letters of what ya initials says

Nice

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Old 06-02-05, 03:57 PM   #11
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Thanx...Uppin this shit
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Old 06-02-05, 05:08 PM   #12
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preciate da votes uppin............................................. .........
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Old 06-02-05, 05:31 PM   #13
CrazyDogg
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

You're a lame emcee, ya barz is gay, its plain to see
So watch me "break dolla" like a "change machine"

^^^^ best line in the battle and it won it for ya!

Opener-tie
Flow-Barz
Structure-Barz
Wording-Barz
Wit-Barz
Closer-Barz
Overall-Barz, by far.....rtf in my battle vs. topical in FL
 
Old 06-02-05, 07:58 PM   #14
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Old 06-02-05, 10:12 PM   #15
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Dolla
your verse was weak i wasn't feeling anything really about it to be honest with you um flow wasn't to bad your your stucture wasn't to bad but the thing that i thought that really was weak was your punchlines they just dont hit one little bit work on creativty play with words some more and keep elevating 1

Barz
um much better verse from you hands down much more flawless verse from you the stucture was pretty good and the flow was very well done your punchlines were what really made me think of you winning this like just a lot more complex and more of a vet at writing punchlines and shit. keep elevating though you could still work its good though 1

v/ Barz Of Steel
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