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View Poll Results: XKwizit vs. Phive | |||
Phive | 5 | 55.56% | |
XKwizit | 4 | 44.44% | |
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03-12-05, 09:48 PM | #1 |
Banned: Biting
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XKwizit vs Phive
IP: 4A6A 8AFA
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03-12-05, 09:49 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 09:49 PM.
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03-12-05, 10:14 PM | #3 | |
Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
lyrics fall outta ya mouth like a retard tryin ta spit,
look kid youre even tryin ta wite-out ya shit, (his white text) Whats next g, gonna threaten me, sayin you roll with crips, and kill bloods, not likely, #1 i might be, with ya sig beein the game, it makes me laugh, throw you punches so hard, put ya brain in ya ass, rap attack, steppin on niggaz like cut crack, smash ya lungs through ya back, laughin cuz your faker than a big mac, cant go on cuz you back track, i go forward like lyrical werdplay, you say ya talkin ta god on ya knees, but ya neva pray, 8th wonder, is xkwizit gay, off the topic, you spit shit so stop it, knockin you wit every hit, cant stand ta sit, you say your the best, well im da rap critique, so stop lyin to ya self, put exzibit/xkwizit back on the shelf, youve got less elevation, than a crippled elf,
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03-12-05, 10:24 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 4A6A 8AFA
XKwizit has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 10:24 PM.
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03-12-05, 10:57 PM | #5 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 4A6A 8AFA
Punches and Mo' Punches
I neva heard of you, therefore I'll have to murder YOU-VERY-QUICKLY I'll capitalized ya name in this battle, But its the onli tyme ya BIGGER-THAN-ME 1 YOU-WANT-IT? I can't believe i'm battlin RV's WEAKEST-OPPONENT PHIVE-WINNIN?.. i'll hand over another loss and have give him DAWSON'S-CREEK-MOMENT 2 Wax That Ass Like A-CANDLE; Stop Loosin, You Settin A BAD-EXAMPLE Lets Not Talk About Your Wins, Cause you don't even HAVE-A-HANDFUL 3 You Almost Need 'Everything On Ya Side' So Im SENDING-SOME-BIBLES Cuz Phive Keeps Getting 'Fucked Up' Like CONSTANT-PEDOPHILES [/u]4[/u] Kid, try TO-HIT-ME, Personals and punches is WHAT-I-BRING Jus cuz part of ya name is HIVE doesn't mean ya PUNCHES-WILL-STING 5 |
03-13-05, 02:31 PM | #6 | |
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IP: C25B 8CA8
uppin fo some mutha fuckin votes
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03-14-05, 12:14 PM | #7 | |
Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: 64A0 EA20
uppin fo some votes ill return the favour aight gs
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03-14-05, 09:16 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 995C FBA1
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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03-15-05, 11:48 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 64A0 EA20
uppin fo some votes people ill return the favourrrrrrrrrrrr
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03-16-05, 09:55 AM | #10 |
..::shut the fuck up::..
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IP: 9395 3890
Voted For: XKwizit
this verse was alot better more hard hitting punchlines and alot better structure the other verse fell off a little it was consistant enough to win on punchlines this verse was the better one... I was feeling the other verse because of the structue and boring to read... |
03-17-05, 11:16 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 995C FBA1
you fuckin nigger you fuckin vote against me all the time with the same feed back dumb mutha fucka your an alias nigga
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03-19-05, 10:55 AM | #12 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
Voted For: XKwizit
ight this in my opinion was a 1-sided battle XKwizit- Punches was good very decent. Flowed nicely. Personals was good you picked up some info. Wordplays was decent. U Got Plenty of MULTI'Z. Showstopper- Aiiiight, The punches here was not so good, they didn't hit. Flow was forced. Personals you picked up was played. Wordplay can't say you have some, but you dont. Overall=This battle was in X's favor, Phive you need elevation in ur wordplay played punches forced flow and a couple of personals. X nice punches, with some good flow, and decent wordplay. My vote goes to X. I had read Phive's verse over and over, manly you was talking about his sig of the game, you need to direct punches to HIM manly and then his girl. X came harder with punches DIRECTED AT YOU! |
03-22-05, 02:25 PM | #13 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: C024 E429
Voted For: XKwizit
XKwizit- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........ phive- your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10....... V/ XKwizit make sure 2 return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=183063 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182879 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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03-22-05, 06:27 PM | #14 | |
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IP: B42F F1DA
uppin playas............................................ ...........................................
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03-23-05, 10:50 PM | #15 | |
the real man of steel
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IP: 58E6 C588
Voted For: XKwizit
V/Xkwizit.....he came wit hard hitting punchs that were consistent an good personals...also u had better structure....phive...u are gettin better but ur structure needs work an some ur punchs to u use alot of basic vocab an diss's....No Hate........ RETURN THE FAVOR opener=x closer=x structure=x punchs=x vocab=x personals=x overall=xkwizit
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