aight its set up just check in then put down your verse, I will follow and put my down after you.

10-12 lines
normal rules (check out the rules)

I be spitting the shit while you be shitting the bricks/
You falling down on the sound like a fat bitch on trips/
You chose to battle me and it comes at a cost/
You should have ignored, thats the best way to avoid a loss/
I read your battles, they lame, you lost your own game/
Your one i'll have to put down on the way to my fame/
The way that your gawping, you'd think you were dead/
You should have the word 'LOSER' inked straight onto your head/
Your names a mistake, i bet you were to/
Your Ma was on smack when she concieved you/
So heres to another loss, i'm not gonna preach/
Just take your fat ass back to West Palm Beach/

You spill..................that was my attempt..................pleez be voting people..................no hate votes........................................purel y on talent..................

peace and love

Yo Pale Horse, where you at? your spill nigga, if you think you can follow that. No prewritten shit either, origional and no feeding of others shit or mine.....you know the rules......

how did you know I wuz fat

sorry for takin so long bro; work is mad busy I am on my lunch break now so I will put somethin togeather and post by the end of the hour.

You's bout to bleed more than when your on the rag,
and tell that bitch ass boyfriend who wrote that shit for you Jamie hes a fag
You wanna collide wit me nigga, back the fuck up
I'll go back in time to punch ya moms in da gut
so your born deformed and she dont want you no more
kick you out on da street and make you become a whore
ohh wait thats reality but thats how most bitches are from the Brokka nationality
its just a formality that you flip trix and suck other guys dix in bathroom stalls of country bars playin the dixie chix you bitch
There is a sexual harassment suit that you can try to file
cause when this battles through Im'a rape you Doggy Style!!!

There ya go

iight iight both yall need to ante up ya skills....this was like an elementary school battle....neither had good punches..both had good disses even tho they were soft..pale had a lil heat to his so to me he edge this

vote pale

She pretty much said it all...

Kinda weak with ya skills, guys.

But Pale did bring more heat, sounded more personal and hit harder of the two.
Plus he had that nice multi spree at the end I enjoyed.

Bring wordplay to ya game, guys.

That is all.

Peace

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Punches: Pale
Flow: Pale
Wordplay: Neither

lol newbies keep elevatin y'all!

Vote- Pale Horse

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uppin for votes......please dont sleep cause when I get my 100 posts in I will most definately be votin on everyones junk. uppin for votes #4

this was a very weak battle pale nigga use can do betta then dat nigga come on i sein betta from you nigga aight but overall pale won this wit punchs and dats it holla