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Old 06-08-04, 07:53 PM   #1
IlluGin
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k its a bit short but otha than that i thought it was real and yall would like it
tell me what yall think

in this life theres decisions that have to be made/
lies to be told and games to be played/
you win some, you lose some,quit while yer ahead/
or youll wind up broke,or even worse wind up dead/
if you need to cross a road,better look both ways/
analyze the situation,cuz stupidity never pays/
take the high road in life,dont get caught up in the mess/
you can live your life a happy man,leave misery to the rest/
if money is the root of evil,i guess only the poor are good/
but that dont make much sense to me,i never quite understood/
it means that if we had nothing,wed all appreciate/
the things we take for granted,when life is going great/
get the bigger picture,think outside the box/
piece together the puzzle,connect all the dots/
in the scary world we live in,we must be aware/
cant drop the ball,we must handle with care/
hate is baggage,why fight?,smile away/
dont die by the gun.live to fight another day/

much luv fer feedback...holla at cha boi
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Old 06-09-04, 12:06 PM   #2
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not to bad for a rookie but i think u def need to keep elevation good luck.................
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