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08-15-05, 04:59 PM | #1 | ||||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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Diary of the Demon Seed
IP: F38C 26F8
Monday 8-15-05, 4:59 PM
Reminiscing: came up poor as fuck, schooled on the front porch did well in school, but need more than good grades in the Short Short North, producin' nuthin' but drugz, thugz and roaches and parinoia, got me jumpin' whenever someone approaches me from behind, and it's a permanent condition moved up out the hood, and i still ain't changed how i'm livin' figured since i was nigga be treated as a demon seed so i thought i'd be accepted if i stopped smokin' weed not me, they accused ME of sellin' the shit? told em to look at my clothes do i look like i'm rich? but they don't want to hear logic when it don't suit their story i was so desperate for acceptance would've took it on Maury and took a drug test lie detector whatever don't matter cuz to the neighbors i'll be guilty forever mother passed and fosho it was a tragedy but hurts more cuz thru the pain wit people mad at me they ain't wanna have a brothaz back watchin' him cry but thinkin i deserved every tear out my eye and my boyz knowin' i'm innocent, wouldn't stick up for me instead fucked around with my girl, damn i thought we was homies? but i think i've finally had enough, had it up to here with people's bullshit, to the hypocrits, fuck u the ones that knew what i did and didn't do, the ones who did it themselves there's a time when a real man has to look at himself and realize that america eats it's babies, that's just my luck now they know why i live a THUG LIFE and don't give a fuck
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled Last edited by chip : 08-15-05 at 09:09 PM. |
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08-16-05, 03:51 PM | #2 | ||||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: F38C 26F8
Tuesday 2:52, 8-16-05
My Dream: i am fighting him. there's a large crowd watching and i'm wandering who invited them his name is in red and i won the crowd jumps in after me, but i start to run and got away, fastforward to the next day he looks at me and i hear the demon say something but i can't quite make out what it is his name no longer appears in red it's metallic and he shows himself in a suit of armor i don't care what he does to me as long as he doesn't harm her *yawn* tired, wakin' up in a cold sweat still scared like i'm afraid i ain't woke up yet i can't remember who the woman was or the demon but i guess i'd probably know em if i seen em
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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08-18-05, 04:38 PM | #3 | ||||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: F38C 26F8
Thursday 4:35, 8-18-05
i had the dream again: woke up feelin oddly calm no racing heart beat or sweaty palms was feelin good for no reason hopped up and hit the shower looked at my clock blinkin 12, we must've lost power no sweat, no where to go, we still on summer break my stepmom yellin already for goodness sake wanted to let her know how i feel but wasn' feelin it went to my dude's house cuz i suspected he was stealin shit and he was, i found 4 cd's he swears were his but belonged to me w/e, i just and logged on to that rapverse my only escape, oh well, anything that works
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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08-21-05, 02:34 PM | #4 | ||||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: F38C 26F8
Sunday 2:20, 8-21-05
self-explanation: my inspiration cry of one of the last guy's reppin this troubled nation "chip is like, love from the dime that's fine as DAMMMMMMMMMN, work on the streets gettin weed for my fams i'm like heroin, once u get it u realize that u need it that's why anyone fuckin wit me or TT is defeated i'm like, hell on earth, cursed since birth to be the hottest of the hot, demon seed, i put in work more than any of these average cats perfectin my craft i been on this track a nigga light-year and a half, u do the math my poetry's deep, i'll never fall to a creep on a beat, i'm here to murder all y'all that think u the champ and alwayz be tyrin me witout doin your homework, just check out my diary the fiery, emotional type to type his type and tell em to get the gunz, we goin ridin tonight i'm like, me rantin and ravin, misbehavin, like teen girls sneakin to the party at the Days Inn i'm like amazin, or synonym wit the same definition look at work from me and the best neva sick of the repetition i'm like me, the hottest of the hot workin MC's and extra cold, your Rapperz feel a draft, be certain it's me" after a little free'n, i've to a conclusion: i'm cocky as fuck! oh well, at least i can back it up.
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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08-25-05, 10:59 PM | #5 | ||||
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yea mayne u got an interesting diary also but i agree wit ya u need 2 increase ur vocab in ur drops so people like myself read it can c tha imagery & creativity in it fa sho but overall u got talent & alot of potential ight keep writing
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08-27-05, 12:07 AM | #6 | ||||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: F38C 26F8
good lookin on the feedback......... srry about the imagery wit the dream. true story, but i can only tell u what i remember.
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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