Newest track laid today...for the Kill house vol. 1 mixtape my boy is puttin together in my area.... dope track The Realest KIllaz worst nightmare...Check it out leave feed an ill RTF.. Always do...holla at yo boyz

Line-up is as follows:
Intro - Vato
1stverse - Vato
HoOk - Vato
2ndverse - El Rey
HoOk - Vato

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=561615
^^^^^First one on page lofi hifi u know what it is^^^^^^^^^


My links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2825738
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2825732
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2825726


*ride till i die/ killhouse*

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ok beat obviously iv heard it cool shit
flow is off a little bit in the beginning o your verse but it gets better you kinda mumble some words
hook first line kinda sounds off beat besides that its pretty cool lol is the screwed part sayign fuck chevy's?
el ray you osund a little too loud flow is pretty much on but its not too smooth
lyrically you were pretty hot

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-Beat
I dont like it its too mainstream lol j/p
but yeah

Vato - Your quality is good....your flow is a little choppy in some parts...your lyrics are good...your emotion is good...u kinda lack pressense in this song..it was okay tho
you did a okay job for this

hook-I dont know it just didnt catch my attention........thats what the hooks sposed too do.....work on the melody a little....the flow was off a little bit

El Rey - I am more and more suprized every time i hear you..I liked the lyrics...but i understand how u 'dont wanna get the fame' and how mainstream 'party' music is bad...but you gotta realize thats how hip hop started..too get the party MOVIN!!
well anyways flow was good and everything else was good.....u came harder then VATO

overall-decent track..iono didn't really seem like a song sounded like somthing ya'll just did in a hurry..not to bad tho...keep it up

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TheMyspace

Hahahaha right i hear that yo this track gully man

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lol I konw this beat like it. Forget who it was tho. but good shit

first verse... nice delivery and emotion. flow coo kinda choppy in places, but for most part it was good.

hook, ehh iunno i guess it was alright. wasn't bad, wasn't good. just aiight

second verse, damn you improve everytime i hear you yo. flow choppy tho in places, like you rush some places. it's ok, but gotta improve that. But lyrics were pretty coo. sounded like Jay-Z in end of verse lol. but verse was coo

hook again, ehh shit kinda growing on me. lol it's coo actually. I just think doing it once would be good, twice overdid it.

but overall, not a bad joint by y'all man. Pretty good listen. both y'all improving at a fast rate, so that's always good. so stay up. 8/10

Vato RTF on this if you could:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233921

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Good looks on the feed uppin lol.. will return the feed on spul...past tense....but yea uppin cuz mufuckaz is sleepin' holla

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rtf vato

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Yo my fat doggy i was outta town i will return the favor right now.... BTW the beat was 2pac an 50 cent Realest Killaz

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