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B.I.Detained 5 83.33%
AJ 1 16.67%
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Old 01-12-04, 07:11 PM   #1
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AJ vs B.I.Detained

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To explain me not battleing in six months. This is a new name, so naturally I signed up earlier thne October.

Anyway, rules:
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No Crew, Hate, D/R Votes.
You Spit First.
No Feeding.
No Biting.
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This should be good, even know I am rusty, read well.
Good luck to ya B.I.
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Old 01-12-04, 07:13 PM   #2
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drop rite
afta me
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Old 01-12-04, 07:34 PM   #3
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Re: AJ vs B.I.Detained

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Welcome bk..sniff..I knew ya were Bk

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This is a new name, so naturally I signed up earlier thne October.

huh..ya bin signed up that long & still Nobody Knows Ya
ya can't be Sober..see AJ writes w/ an Alcoholic Jene..
coz yhisRhymes cunt spark Fire from a Dose of Carosene
wot I mean..is..how du Cum Bk to a Merkin in an Instant
Aj gets son'd e'where he goes..wel at least he's Consistent
Damn sure not Resistant..coz 6 wins Rep his Cat Lives..
this Pussy gets Owned..on Knife edge from Blunt Knives
he still Thrives..but still Dies..like Icarus chasing Blue Skies
in my Eyes..Aj's Wings got clipped the 2nd he got in my Line
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Old 01-12-04, 07:38 PM   #4
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The Fag Rejected From The Rejects Wannabe From The Projects
It's Time To Subject To The Object Known To You As A Prospect
The Kids Anarexic Spitten After Pussy A Faggot to Be Asskicked
The Kid Thinks He Quick Like A Crack Head Lookin For A Quick Fix
He Flipped On kitkaT To Get Laughed At By A 0-10 Willy Nasdaq
Terroist Strait From Iraq Commaco. His Own People By MisMatch
I'll Have A Heart Attack Cuz Could Lack No Less Skill Like Slack
Silhoutted In His Former Form Of Bri Speaks "NOOBS FORWARNED"
Shuned And Scorned By Lack Of Knowledge By GrannyTranny Porn
I.B Detained By His Impedasized Hanging Corpse Blood Stained
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Old 01-12-04, 07:54 PM   #5
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wow that looks damn familiar^^^
not sayin ya bit but did ya Recycle??
anyways 1st
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Old 01-12-04, 08:00 PM   #6
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Yeah, I wrote that for a tryout a day ago. I thought it was pretty damn good so I kept it for further use. It's only the first 5 lines though. I will admit it, if I lose for that then let it be, but it is dumb. Oh well.

1st Uppin From Me...
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Old 01-12-04, 08:40 PM   #7
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2nd Uppin From Me...

Come on people, this isant a bad battle, drop your links and your battles will be voted on.
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Old 01-12-04, 09:25 PM   #8
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3rd Uppin...

Stop sleeping on this...100 Character Rule Is Cool.............................................. ....
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Old 01-13-04, 09:59 AM   #9
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4th Uppin For Votes

Come on people, drop your links and we will get to your battles, a good battle here, don't sleep on it please.
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Old 01-13-04, 01:53 PM   #10
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aj i thought u blew ass none of ur shit made any sense and neither one of you can write
 
Old 01-13-04, 02:16 PM   #11
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AJ...you lost me bro..maybe i misunderstood your verse..
but for the most part i just didnt get it..sorry..just being honest..
the flow was good and the structure was there..but i didnt get any of your punches
i have been here a while and i have read a lot of battles..most of them i understand
but i was completely lost...maybe you can explain wtf you were talking about..
but as it stands...i am confused...

B.I.
nice overall...
fell off in some areas but you were pretty consistent..
you have elevated alot...since i beat you *wink*lol
naw...for real good shit...flow was there..nice structure
and nice punches...seen you do better..but u got the job done here

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wot I mean..is..how du Cum Bk to a Merkin in an Instant
Aj gets son'd e'where he goes..wel at least he's Consistent

made me laugh..

no hat AJ..just didnt get most of your verse...
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Old 01-13-04, 03:08 PM   #12
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B.I.Detained you have to many wins
 
Old 01-13-04, 07:13 PM   #13
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wtf???
y the fuck is it 1-1 wen ya havent got a vote??
anyways uppin this shizznit
2nd
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Old 01-13-04, 07:40 PM   #14
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Vote B.I....overall verse was aight, you had some simple concepts a bit N only a few of ya punches relly hit in my eyes...but you caught the win no doubt....nice scheme N flow....

A.J your verse was alot of multis and just mainly rhymin words....i mean that's koo in a battle verse but there's no real punches.....i don't think you hit him enough to get you this win.....
 
Old 01-13-04, 07:41 PM   #15
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My bad i forgot to add this ish in when i was puttin up my vote but can y'all..............
Please return the fav on this battle if u may........http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105811
 
 


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