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Old 06-04-06, 08:58 AM   #1
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5. Daubs (6-4) vs. 6. Shake-zula (3-0)

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Old 06-04-06, 09:34 AM   #2
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How many you wanna go mate, bout 20?
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Old 06-04-06, 08:16 PM   #3
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It doesn't matter...I might just go 16 if I drop first...g/l
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Old 06-08-06, 11:13 AM   #4
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Im jus goin 12 or somethin later, that cool?
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Old 06-08-06, 07:07 PM   #5
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you aint done shit you dumb prick, now your barking drills?
but you aint hot 'sh....you just wish you had half his skills
matter of fact your plain trash, someone hush this wack talker
"super SZ" aint what the fans chant..its what the fat twat orders
faggot twat aint rappin bad...your text aint harming mate
ya verse needs so many touch ups, it coulld get charged with rape
ive seen ya pic so know that ppl wouldnt wanna look at him
so il leave this mugshot, like the tournament he's not gonna win
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Old 06-08-06, 10:44 PM   #6
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U dissed URSELF with that verse. What can I say?...
It's like u got ya aim backwards...so I'm bout to leave u MIA
U queer. Yo, don't boast who u're "better" than...
U been on this site for 2 years, and I'm still more of a veteran
U should know RV voters' taste; what they feel now...
'Coz wisdom comes with age...so, i'm guessing that u're senile
U won't take this like a man. U'll cry and scream, geek...
The link in ya sig is proof that there's always a girl behind DD's
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Old 06-08-06, 10:46 PM   #7
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matter of fact your plain trash, someone hush this wack talker
"super SZ" aint what the fans chant..its what the fat twat orders
faggot twat aint rappin bad...your text aint harming mate
ya verse needs so many touch ups, it coulld get charged with rape
ive seen ya pic so know that ppl wouldnt wanna look at him
so il leave this mugshot, like the tournament he's not gonna win

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U dissed URSELF with that verse. What can I say?...
It's like u got ya aim backwards...so I'm bout to leave u MIA
U queer. Yo, don't boast who u're "better" than...
U been on this site for 2 years, and I'm still more of a veteran
U should know RV voters' taste; what they feel now...
'Coz wisdom comes with age...so, i'm guessing that u're senile
U won't take this like a man. U'll cry and scream, geek...
The link in ya sig is proof that there's always a girl behind DD's

SZ takes this for more quotables

v/Shake
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Old 06-08-06, 11:03 PM   #8
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ive seen ya pic so know that ppl wouldnt wanna look at him
so il leave this mugshot, like the tournament he's not gonna win

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U dissed URSELF with that verse. What can I say?...
It's like u got ya aim backwards...so I'm bout to leave u MIA
U should know RV voters' taste; what they feel now...
'Coz wisdom comes with age...so, i'm guessing that u're senile

Shake took this the MIA line was pretty sick nicest one I've seen this week...Daubs you showed but you didn't show enuff...

Vote - Shake-Zula
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Old 06-08-06, 11:09 PM   #9
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you aint done shit you dumb prick, now your barking drills?
but you aint hot 'sh....you just wish you had half his skills
matter of fact your plain trash, someone hush this wack talker
"super SZ" aint what the fans chant..its what the fat twat orders

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U dissed URSELF with that verse. What can I say?...
It's like u got ya aim backwards...so I'm bout to leave u MIA
U should know RV voters' taste; what they feel now...
'Coz wisdom comes with age...so, i'm guessing that u're senile


Yeah, I have it tied on quotables. Honestly, both verses were gay as fuck. But I honestly laughed a little more at Danny's two quotables and his verse was overall a slightly bit better. I think that shake couldn't be fucked with doing anything and the fact that he started almost every line with "U"... it was "U this... and U that" and that really is a pet peeve of mine.

V/ - Daubs
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Old 06-08-06, 11:23 PM   #10
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you aint done shit you dumb prick, now your barking drills?
but you aint hot 'sh....you just wish you had half his skills
matter of fact your plain trash, someone hush this wack talker
"super SZ" aint what the fans chant..its what the fat twat orders

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U dissed URSELF with that verse. What can I say?...
It's like u got ya aim backwards...so I'm bout to leave u MIA
U should know RV voters' taste; what they feel now...
'Coz wisdom comes with age...so, i'm guessing that u're senile
U won't take this like a man. U'll cry and scream, geek...
The link in ya sig is proof that there's always a girl behind DD's

this was a little cool battle, but i got Shake takin this by one quotable, his personals just hit harder than Daubs did.

Vote-Shake Zula
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Old 06-09-06, 09:12 AM   #11
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matter of fact your plain trash, someone hush this wack talker
"super SZ" aint what the fans chant..its what the fat twat orders
faggot twat aint rappin bad...your text aint harming mate
ya verse needs so many touch ups, it coulld get charged with rape
ive seen ya pic so know that ppl wouldnt wanna look at him
so il leave this mugshot, like the tournament he's not gonna win
you aint done shit you dumb prick, now your barking drills?
but you aint hot 'sh....you just wish you had half his skills
^ you know i had to quote that

daubs that whole verse was flames i dont think these people are voting
based on votes as much as whose who

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U queer. Yo, don't boast who u're "better" than...
U been on this site for 2 years, and I'm still more of a veteran
U should know RV voters' taste; what they feel now...
'Coz wisdom comes with age...so, i'm guessing that u're senile

that DD line is played as shit vs daubs, and im not giving anybody credit for an AIM
MIA punch sorry
i dont really see how Daubs DIDNT win
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Old 06-09-06, 05:34 PM   #12
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matter of fact your plain trash, someone hush this wack talker
"super SZ" aint what the fans chant..its what the fat twat orders
faggot twat aint rappin bad...your text aint harming mate
ya verse needs so many touch ups, it coulld get charged with rape

vs

U dissed URSELF with that verse. What can I say?...
It's like u got ya aim backwards...so I'm bout to leave u MIA
U queer. Yo, don't boast who u're "better" than...
U been on this site for 2 years, and I'm still more of a veteran
U should know RV voters' taste; what they feel now...
'Coz wisdom comes with age...so, i'm guessing that u're senile

v/ shake-zula
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Old 06-09-06, 05:57 PM   #13
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faggot twat aint rappin bad...your text aint harming mate
ya verse needs so many touch ups, it coulld get charged with rape
ive seen ya pic so know that ppl wouldnt wanna look at him
so il leave this mugshot, like the tournament he's not gonna win

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U dissed URSELF with that verse. What can I say?...
It's like u got ya aim backwards...so I'm bout to leave u MIA
U queer. Yo, don't boast who u're "better" than...
U been on this site for 2 years, and I'm still more of a veteran
U should know RV voters' taste; what they feel now...
'Coz wisdom comes with age...so, i'm guessing that u're senile

koo little battle, daubs came kinda meh tho, didnt really seem to be tryin, shake came and did just about enough to get the win... much respect to both emcees...

vote- shake
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Old 06-09-06, 11:14 PM   #14
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U dissed URSELF with that verse. What can I say?...
It's like u got ya aim backwards...so I'm bout to leave u MIA

yeah... I could quote most of shake's verse...

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Old 06-10-06, 05:35 PM   #15
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this was pretty close, shake was consistent but daubs had the touch up l;ine i thought was maybe the best line of the battle. i vote shake tho cos aocuple of dausb lines i wasnt feeling and i have shake just edging with consistency, nothing sik... just edged it. touch up line was nice tho

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