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Here's my drop, its deep so read carefully


This anger builds inside me, when I have to ask myself these serious questions
Looking for real answers but none come, so I am stuck wondering an guessin'
Always wondering why poverty is associated with being black
If we are truly free, why is economic freedom something that we still lack?
Does complexion determine our financial transgressions?
Does it determine our professions or financial inflections?
I wish I could honestly say no, but we all know the truth
All recession means is less jobs are gonna be available for black youth!!!
As a people we have to be aware that we only halfway there
I mean black CEO's are rare, this deal we got really ain't fair!!!!!
This unity shit is all a facod, to them we're just a quota!!!
Nothing more than a statistic, a walking minority figure touta!!!
We have to face reality, these aren't times for us to prosper
Politicians an public relations should receive a yearly oscar
Cuz their acting job every year is performed to absolute perfection
Got many minorities feelin' like they have got a real connection
They clouded our brains, jus simply gave us a mental infection
Minorities are the majority but caucasion is the exception
Now don't these ethics seem at all backwards to you!!!!?
Yeah minorites can prosper but only the select few!!!!
Thats bullshit!!!, everyday I watch from my window as my people die
But they were fed that same bullshit if you work hard an continue to try
You will be a success, but yet an still, every bother I know has been jailed
They all had their own dreams, their own pursuits but I guess they failed
Cuz I seriously doubt their childhood dreams were being in the penitentary
An getting locked down 3 years jus to be sentenced to a century
They all were victims of this countries morals, these experiences numb me
Cuz their labels criminals, they only did what they did cuz they were hungry!!!
We suppose to be a country of unity, an I live in lady libery's birthplace
But I don't understand why if u planned to keep us down u freed us in the 1st place


This has been your exclusive with Triple_N

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Triple N: Whoa. Someone feels oppressed. lol. I don't agree with your stance on politics. But we different. Peeps need to come to Canada, we got real equality up hurrr. LOL - on the real, the word play was ill, and the story was told nicely. Obviously the topic was anger and you spoke on what you was angry about. Other than not agreeing with your opinion, the way you spoke it was hella nice, and you obvoiusly are there on a mental level with your thoughts on anger. Hella nice drop.

9/10

Shadow: A little more general with anger issues, but you spoke not on what made you angry, but how anger reacted, or infected the world or society. Totally different style, but nice none the less. Some stuff like punchin pillows seemed a little simple, but still - emotion was told, and I got the picture that way. Word play could be upped as well as multi's. Nice drop.

8/10

vote: Triple N

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this was a pretty tight battle.

Triple, you had some hot shit. Nice emotion in yo piece. You had some nice flow and really good lines in here. I was feelin' a lot of it. I agree wit some of your views on this piece. But this was a hot drop man. Really good job. You should do this more often.

Shadow, good drop. But I think it would have been better if yo lines were longer. But overall you had nice flow and good emotion too. But it jus wasn't enough for Triple in the end.

v/Triple Nothin'

what.. damn man he didnt even rap aout anger he rapped about how bad it is to be black.. man fuck yall

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alright 1-1 uppin this shit.. nice drop i thought u fell a lil of topic though

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structure tie if shadow did his like triples his lies r mad uneven both could use a lil work though
vocab triple both were nice though
flow tie both had good flow
emotion i think tripl got it barely because he rapped abotu shit that angers him real shit that happens shadow ur was good 2 no doubt but im givin it 2 triple because he rel;ated it 2 his life

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Triple N - Verse was deep. Nice. Ya had some nice multi's. The verse painted a picture cuz ya lyrics were pure. Nice drop. 8.5/10

Shadow - Yo verse was tight too. But it just wasn't on point like Triple's. I saw a couple of words used to much. And the flow wasn't as nice as Triple's. But ya did ya thing. No hate. 7/10

Vote - Triple N
I voted so plz return tha favor. Preciate.
Me vs. Genocide

can i ask you a question..? how did it paint a picture?? ur obviosly dickride u didnt even read the verse... becuz if u would have u woulda realized that were not telling a story and he didnt give u any imagry fucking bullshit
ohh by the way triple will a peerz vote will be takin out becuz it was unexplained... uppin 2-1 ur favor

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Dick ridin? Nigga pleaz. Don't hate and take ya loss like man. I don't even know triple n and have neva voted on any of his other battles. Check tha stats ho.

Triple- you had some nice emotion..flow was kinda weak and your struc
was "tipsy" and you kinda fell off the topic and started talkin bout how hard
it is to be black..but all in all nice drop

8/10

Shadow- you had some nice emotion in there and your struc and flow was a little
better than Triple's and you stayed on subject...........

8.6/10

vote: Shadow he stayed on subject and his flow and struc was a lil better

Triple: on the emotion part...it was there. very very deep...felt it. multies in there..vocab was nice....and the key thing was imagery...nice piece 8/10

shadow: just like triple you had nice emotion in there also. flow was a little off in some parts. anger this anger that...not much usage of words? but good piece..
imagery you lack that. 7/10

v/triple

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