15 lines, normal rules
no crew votes, hate, etc

i'm spitting first

good luck

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yep

you set it up wrong

no i didn't

forgot to check in, verse'll due at half past as promised

checkin in.........

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checkin in to ima start to write to aight man good luck

oooooooooppps i thought ya did mah bad

this guy likes long walks by tha beach and hikes/
he knew wat he was when he saw 2 spread open dikes/
i see him tryin to catch tha fuckin flow he bobbin his head/
he doesnt like jerkin off he likes tha fuckin dildo instead/
he likes to callout and try to battle fuckin famous men/
this guy's been pluged in the ass more then jenna jameson/
he dont like dem bad girls he fuckin likes dem nice nice ladies/
this guy' has fourty two fuckin remixes to ice ice baby/
ask him on this fuckin site i'm the only one fuckin fears/
he pm's me sayin ima slave for your like fuckin britney spears/
i know that he wants to say i'm rich i got a bently it's great/
he got that from tha pention for his fuckin mental estate/
i suggest that u open your fuckin mouth i'm ready to ejaculate/
special classes dont fuckin count i suggest u go back and regraduate/
make u run for hours and make u eat sand so u fuckin deyhidrate/


aight yall tha jenna jameson line was cause she is a porn star and got fucked everwhere
and that mental estate line a pention is money wether it be from a war or your self problems

o sorry and tha spread open dikes part was that spread open dikes would be pussy

come on man i got sick of waitin hurry up and drop that shit

Aight...listen up...listen up...here we go!

Thought ur da illest on da “block”…damn u can’t even be a “writer”//
You’re on “writer’s block”, nigga, I’m iller cause I’m a fighter//
Vision? I’m the nigga wit a vision to see through your plan//
I’ll leave this bitch short sighted, hit over the head with a frying pan//
I could just walk up to this bitches house and start fuckin’ his ex//
And this kid can’t protect her even if he was labeled latex//
Every1 has something to compliment me bout…

Wrong thread yo,
I never fail without a fight, let alone setting this shit right//
Embarrassed, right? Letting a flyweight saying that ur shit ain’t tight//
I’m a nigga with lyrical ambitions, while this bitch has medical condition//
People sayin this bitch would win is like “Beyond Belief; Fact or Fiction”//
Bitch, my shit is a mile beyond what you could “write with pencil”//
I type my shit out yo, I take this bitch out with a stencil,
Cause I have huge lyrical potential//

I was gonna go first yo...

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yo good battle yo (clap, clap)

there's a lot of fake personals in your verse, that's gay, otherwise ur wise was good

uppin for votes.......

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aight yall uppin for some fuckin votes in this bitch

break down

punches:night
flow:both
structure:night
wordplay:none
personals:both
overall:night vision

night vision.............. go check in................. your in the crew welcome stay active

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The Legacy

Its Only Getting Better

heres tha break down
punches:night
flow:both
structure:night
wordplay:none
personals:both
overall:night vision

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