Yo..if this in the wrong place apologies..i got hella confused lol.

Links to feedback:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213185
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213355

Something i did awhile ago..nothing majortried to be creative.

Interject man..This is part 2 of showing my worldwide dominance/
Il travel back in time in England take the throne and display arrogance/
Taking over the European continent and starting with Iceland/
wearing ice man, melt the alps and flood Switzerland yall see my plan/
its priceless like a Dutch prostitute waiting to be sliced like Italian meals/
give her more pain than Spain, destroy armadas so you know im real/
East make way as i take turkey by the wings like the flag leave red stains/
slain dismembered bodies stem from Russia to near the Ukraine/
Eye is real, so i make more separations in Israel like the Gaza strip/
the plaza bitch and i need to swim when i use the dead sea as a ship/
Asia gets thrown into turmoil, floods like tsunami and broken dams/
i take over Kashmir while blowing up the remains of Afghanistan/
il leave India and Pakistan for now and i fight the triads up in Japan/
or the Yakuza, segregate parts of Asia like hillbillies in the Ku Klux Klan/

again nothing major just messing around with the idea.

hmm? ok so i get now feedback..

This was pretty decent... I mean... I'm sure you can get better...

its priceless like a Dutch prostitute waiting to be sliced like Italian meals/
^lmao at that line. Have to love Dutch prostitots... I mean... Prostitutes.

Just keep writin' man...

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