checkness

lets go ummm, 14-18 or somethin like that lol, g' luck

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yup, 14-18 is cool..

g/l.

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ight, i went 18 and..

i’m still new to RV, but i’ve been around the net.. strayed and crap
you think you’re the shit.. how COM everyone says your wack?
your mocked everywhere.. but i’m saying that i’ll boot ya
TB is great @ RB.. Carnell Williams looks like a player of the future
but you aren’t a playa.. i can tell from the shit i’ve read in your verses
you got mad bitches.. hittin’ you over the head wit they purses
when you try & spit game. shit mannnnn.. you’ll be struck till
you brace yourself.. either way you’ll still leave with a buck grill
you are original.. a breath of fresh air.. you get the gist of it kid
your abnormal.. till i made them bruised from fists to ya ribs
your wack as fuck.. i don’t need to glance your perspective
cause Brown eye warns all readers – ‘ass is suggested’
we all share music.. but i peeped your sig and the difference be
most woman need “myspace!”. needless to say this bitch has 3
you’re a sucker for love.. falling for golddiggers, it stings dude
if you have two sound clits – which one did you give the ring to?
N.Te is the best.. better than you, you'll see me run through
your were booted from the punchline league.. but i'll let you be 1-2

pz.

Bitch i have ONE myspace, are u blind, what's the problem T?
Outta sight?? nah he can see just fine, dumbass just can't read

Ok look.....

Im takin but still chick huntin, wont b a prob nah, i doubt it
I'll either b fuckin ShanTe Ora bitch this dude used 2 go out wit
Dont kno much about em, jus heard some negative comments
I cant judge a book by it's cover
......................so i opened em n ripped out the contents



Damn kid, you gonna fall quick, tryin hard but outta luck still
I MEAN IF ALL THIS!!! dont make ya punches hit, then WTF WILL??!!
Me? im gonna blow, if there's an answer, ima find it son
I wanna know
The man behind the punchlines....not the one whos writin em
Why would i even read that wack shit, while my rhymes is priceless
1-2 playoffs had some Hard comp, since this Soft fag wasnt invited
You a alias or what dude? either way u suck duke, fuckin jew
Smooth guy? na, got more rigid edges n bad taste than a Mountain Dew
Fuckin geek u stink, please explain why i never hearda this lame
Ur the weakest Link, thats y i can't find SHIT when i search ya name



www.te_ora.com

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Hello. yea im still here it ain't over yet
I jus came bak to show voters a REAL personal, since its so ghost in ya text

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Upping for votes.

no voters??????

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lol @ feeding offa my verse.. my bad on that myspace shit tho..

votes?

your mocked everywhere.. but i’m saying that i’ll boot ya
TB is great @ RB.. Carnell Williams looks like a player of the future
but you aren’t a playa.. i can tell from the shit i’ve read in your verses
you got mad bitches.. hittin’ you over the head wit they purses
your wack as fuck.. i don’t need to glance your perspective
cause Brown eye warns all readers – ‘ass is suggested’
we all share music.. but i peeped your sig and the difference be
most woman need “myspace!”. needless to say this bitch has 3
you’re a sucker for love.. falling for golddiggers, it stings dude
if you have two sound clits – which one did you give the ring to?

Vs

Im takin but still chick huntin, wont b a prob nah, i doubt it
I'll either b fuckin ShanTe Ora bitch this dude used 2 go out wit
Dont kno much about em, jus heard some negative comments
I cant judge a book by it's cover
......................so i opened em n ripped out the contents
Damn kid, you gonna fall quick, tryin hard but outta luck still
I MEAN IF ALL THIS!!! dont make ya punches hit, then WTF WILL??!!

V/te ora.... this was a decent one both had some ight lines...tony the lines i quoted were good but you fell off on the others they were weak the mountian dew line no...te you had some good quotes that were funny your verse overall was more consistent wit better personals and punchs...good battle to both

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fake personals work now?

ok uppin

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ughness.........

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stop upping.

if people want to vote, they'll vote.

te-ora

your mocked everywhere.. but i’m saying that i’ll boot ya
TB is great @ RB.. Carnell Williams looks like a player of the future
but you aren’t a playa.. i can tell from the shit i’ve read in your verses
you got mad bitches.. hittin’ you over the head wit they purses

you are original.. a breath of fresh air.. you get the gist of it kid
your abnormal.. till i made them bruised from fists to ya ribs

N.Te is the best.. better than you, you'll see me run through
your were booted from the punchline league.. but i'll let you be 1-2

vs

tony



Im takin but still chick huntin, wont b a prob nah, i doubt it
I'll either b fuckin ShanTe Ora bitch this dude used 2 go out wit

Damn kid, you gonna fall quick, tryin hard but outta luck still
I MEAN IF ALL THIS!!! dont make ya punches hit, then WTF WILL??!!

Fuckin geek u stink, please explain why i never hearda this lame
Ur the weakest Link, thats y i can't find SHIT when i search ya name


word pretty cool battle...though te ora kinda killed this...liked his lines more creative...nice attempt tony but some of your shit kinda missed

vote-te ora