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Old 03-31-03, 11:32 AM   #1
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Battle Verse Help

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I need help cuz my record is 0-2 n if im not careful i'l be 0-3 down i need to know how to be a better battler cuz i cant get my head round this

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Old 03-31-03, 01:00 PM   #2
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punchlines, metaphors, and wordplay . . . the 3 most important things. Don't talk about yourself, concentrate your verse on ur opponent. If a line isnt a punchline, metaphors, wordplay etc. leave it out cause it is filler and will make your verse weak.
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Old 04-08-03, 04:08 PM   #3
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your record is 0-4.


heh. mine is 0-0... so Ill shut up.
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Old 04-09-03, 08:23 AM   #4
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try to make multiple hits on tha same rhyme. if u can keep an "a" rhyme goin an hit 2 or 3 punchlines on it, then ure start winning more. just remeber...punchlines,punchlines,punchlines.
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Old 04-11-03, 12:42 PM   #5
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yea u get no hits unless ur punches have accuracy behind them hit hard fast an wit as few words as possible
i know im one to talk but thats how i fuck my verses up too many fuckin words 100..
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Old 04-11-03, 06:22 PM   #6
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Punches,*
Personal,*
Flow,*
Multies,*
Wordplay,*

Keep these bullets in ya mind all the time an The only way to get better is to always keep rhymin where ever you are if ya see some that stands out to ya just try spittin bout in ya head,
Whenever. in da shower, makin breakfast ETC.....
Just keep rhymin, you'll get better
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Old 04-11-03, 10:12 PM   #7
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To correct the confusion...

Punches... Period.

Wordplay and Metaphors should compliment a punch.

A filler is just a line that is not a punch. Period.

Example:

A simple punch...

You're paranoid for thinkin everybody is laughing at you... though
We're not laughing at, But with you... Since your record's the joke


^ha ha ha... Very fuckin funny.

A Punch w/ Wordplay...

A flaming faggot, You'd give head checks until ya lips get hairy
To speak your language, I'd have to get the definitions from a Dicktionary
(Dick-tionary=Dictionary <-- Wordplay)

^I'm dying with laughter

Punches w/ Metaphors...

I'd hate to son you, And I'm trying my hardest not to fuck you
Since you give better blow jobs, Than Christopher Reeves' lung tubes


^See the comparision? ha ha...

If there is no punch, Than voting on simply metaphors and
wordplay defeats the purpose of a Rap Battle. This isn't word
battle or whose smarter battle... But a Rap Battle.

No punch... Than there should be no win.

Oh, And flow is also as important as punches. Without flow, The
punches are nothing. Flow is Rap itself... And is a fundamental
not to be ignored.
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