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02-23-09, 02:43 PM | #1 | ||||
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one way -b- .vs Wordz Uh God -b-
IP: AA5B 746B
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02-23-09, 04:13 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: B158 C755
check .
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02-24-09, 08:27 PM | #3 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: 6338 861B
death is here........
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02-27-09, 01:52 AM | #4 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: 6338 861B
8 - 10. .
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02-27-09, 10:28 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: B158 C755
no......14
You claim this a walk in the park, but here’s what the truth brings You came on a menstrual cycle and spend most the time on a mood swing I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name If we came face to face you know for sure I’ll be wasting you jerk I’ll smash your head off your verse just to rub your face in the dirt I wanted to throw a punch using name play, involving text and wits But the only book at your level, was designed for crayons and kids I don’t want drama son, so I wont tell you why I think you’re a joke Cause if wordz were exchanged, I might face someone who’s dope weak fuck, there is only one thing animal about your dorky rhymes If I pointed out all your weak spots, you would resemble a porcupine you really need to agree on this, before just doing it Theres no forcing your opponent to drop more just because you did He might not have that much time, or whatever. Just a reminder Thanks. K. stubbs It says no where we have to agree on the lines, I didn't agre on 8-10 anyway
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When I be selling grams I’m slinging bombs like Uncle Sam Myspace It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal... But it's treason when you turn your back on your people. Last edited by Civil. : 02-28-09 at 12:08 PM. |
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02-27-09, 10:10 PM | #6 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: 68B7 D5F7
dropping soon..
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02-27-09, 11:37 PM | #7 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: 68B7 D5F7
Who the fuck r you??? Oh well, here we go again.
yooo his verse=garbage n even the votes r sloppy so after this beating I'll battle ur Soul coz Im tired of stompin nobody. Every post displays ur homosex He stares @ the closet so hard The monster in there knows his options r leave home or death. my fist'll go completely through u I dont acknowledge u at all N' yeah there's only One Way.. too bad for u its through a fuckin wall. U'll never be at my level Its a peek as high as the gods While Kris played u for Casino.. n just used ur name to fill a slot. Fed u to the sharks I can here ur heart crying out N' if there's still only One Way.. the female sex'll start dying out. U didn't wanna agree But my Math is pleasin son I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon Wishin I'd no show this kid should be ashaimed coz Ive watched all ur moves.. After I kicked ur ribs in n u started rollin in pain. 14.
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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here.. Last edited by Civil. : 02-28-09 at 12:07 PM. |
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02-28-09, 12:51 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 91BA 0020
I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be
If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name vs but my Math is pleasin son I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon I am really surprised by this battle. one way you actually came really consistent had alot of nice attempts....where as wordz had alot of simple and played concepts you got to fix that structure back up man v/one way
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02-28-09, 01:43 PM | #9 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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You claim this a walk in the park, but here’s what the truth brings
You came on a menstrual cycle and spend most the time on a mood swing 5.5/10 - decent opener. I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy 6.5/10 - decent personal. But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name 5.5/10 - good personal. If we came face to face you know for sure I’ll be wasting you jerk I’ll smash your head off your verse just to rub your face in the dirt 4.5/10 - meh. I wanted to throw a punch using name play, involving text and wits But the only book at your level, was designed for crayons and kids 5/10 - aahhh... I don’t want drama son, so I wont tell you why I think you’re a joke Cause if wordz were exchanged, I might face someone who’s dope 6/10 - good punch. weak fuck, there is only one thing animal about your dorky rhymes If I pointed out all your weak spots, you would resemble a porcupine 7/10 - liked this closer. 39/70 Wordz ah God: his verse=garbage n even the votes r sloppy so after this beating I'll battle ur Soul coz Im tired of stompin nobody. 6/10 - niice opener. Every post displays ur homosex He stares @ the closet so hard The monster in there knows his options r leave home or death. 4.5/10 - decent. my fist'll go completely through u I dont acknowledge u at all N' yeah there's only One Way.. too bad for u its through a fuckin wall. 4.5/10 - decent personal. U'll never be at my level Its a peek as high as the gods While Kris played u for Casino.. n just used ur name to fill a slot. 4/10 - nah. Fed u to the sharks I can here ur heart crying out N' if there's still only One Way.. the female sex'll start dying out. 5.5/10 - decent personal. U didn't wanna agree But my Math is pleasin son I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon\ 6.5/10 - liked this one. Wishin I'd no show this kid should be ashaimed coz Ive watched all ur moves.. After I kicked ur ribs in n u started rollin in pain. 5.5/10 - iight closer. 36.5/80 this was a very good battle i thought ... unlike civil. i thought wordz was alot less played and had some fresh shit in there.. guess bein' an old head I see where he's comin' from. one way had some niice shit in there as well... and a few more stronger punches which got him the win.
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03-01-09, 11:04 AM | #10 | |||||||
text.even geico can do it
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IP: 3AE9 A7D5
I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be
If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name I don’t want drama son, so I wont tell you why I think you’re a joke Cause if wordz were exchanged, I might face someone who’s dope vs my fist'll go completely through u I dont acknowledge u at all N' yeah there's only One Way.. too bad for u its through a fuckin wall. U didn't wanna agree But my Math is pleasin son I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon not a bad battle, i think one came more consistent with hitting punches in his verse, and words had that second bar that i think was the best bar of the battle. I dont really understand words structure though, both lines could easily fit on the top part of the bar, and you enter it unnecessarily. anyways oneway had a few more harsh attempts imo. v/oneway |
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03-01-09, 05:22 PM | #11 | ||||
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IP: F540 07B2
You claim this a walk in the park, but here’s what the truth brings
You came on a menstrual cycle and spend most the time on a mood swing not feeling this I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy thought this wasnt a good nameplay But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name ok If we came face to face you know for sure I’ll be wasting you jerk I’ll smash your head off your verse just to rub your face in the dirt this was nothng special I wanted to throw a punch using name play, involving text and wits But the only book at your level, was designed for crayons and kids aight I don’t want drama son, so I wont tell you why I think you’re a joke Cause if wordz were exchanged, I might face someone who’s dope lmfao, nice weak fuck, there is only one thing animal about your dorky rhymes If I pointed out all your weak spots, you would resemble a porcupine lol ok vs. his verse=garbage n even the votes r sloppy so after this beating I'll battle ur Soul coz Im tired of stompin nobody. doesn't make sense Every post displays ur homosex He stares @ the closet so hard The monster in there knows his options r leave home or death. i get what you were trying to do my fist'll go completely through u I dont acknowledge u at all N' yeah there's only One Way.. too bad for u its through a fuckin wall. ok nameplay U'll never be at my level Its a peek as high as the gods While Kris played u for Casino.. n just used ur name to fill a slot. lool nah man Fed u to the sharks I can here ur heart crying out N' if there's still only One Way.. the female sex'll start dying out. didnt work the first time U didn't wanna agree But my Math is pleasin son I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon this was ok Wishin I'd no show this kid should be ashaimed coz Ive watched all ur moves.. After I kicked ur ribs in n u started rollin in pain this was aight bad battle imo, you both can do better then this, wordz ah god stop with that lame ass style ur using of makin every punch 3 bars long, it looks ugly... anyways you came aight and almost could have won this but those 2 last bars from one way were cool... one way you gotta try harder tho if you wanna keep making it farther in this tourney, your rhyme scheme is cool but work on the harshness of ur punches v/oneway
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03-02-09, 05:50 PM | #12 | ||||
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IP: 91BA 0020
one way wins 1-0
wordz loses and goes to th jump
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