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Old 01-16-04, 03:02 AM   #1
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-technician- vs B-Kast

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10 Lines
Due 35 Minutes
No Quote or 1 line votes...

600+ posts to vote...

lets go
 
Old 01-16-04, 03:04 AM   #2
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indeed............checking in............this is a rematch....well deserved...
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Old 01-16-04, 03:37 AM   #3
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Most people learn there lesson the first time, but never B Kast
Schools back in session for the worst rhymes, get a seat fast
Said you stopped battlin' well you should'a stayed on the shelf
That verse was so bad you've got permission to hate on yaself
I'm only sonnin' you twice as , you need the critical critisizm
See.....submittin' that verse against me was just a pitifull desicion
U might as well seal ur own fate and withdraw from this rhyme fest
I dont want you to feel stoned hate but sorry your really no contest
I'm sorry to inform you but Aussi Hip Hop will never be Strictly ILL
I K.O.'d you the last Dance and now even better I see victory Still
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Old 01-16-04, 03:41 AM   #4
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Ready to lose again?

IM'ing me, askin Kast for a loss like you want one?
Battle like premature ejaculation, your beat then done
Used to punches missin him, cause all newbs on his loss listing
I told him to pull his finger out, but then i saw he was fisting
Makin' me famous? Bein seen with you would down my rep
Notice he can talk the talk, but can't take his 1st step
Battlin' in Front Lines, got newbs addressin him as "Lord of the Rings"
And punches, all he gives me does in turn on my homophobic feelings
Record initimidating? Cause newbs are what its fed
Jus check on battle his past battle history.....Nuff Said


My expolrer jus froze so i ahd to come post it thorugh AOL, sorry bout the extra 2 minutes ...
 
Old 01-16-04, 03:44 AM   #5
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hahaha ^ i ko'd you!.....lose again?..............uppin.......and ur on my lost record.....calling yourself a newb? jp.........good verese tho........uppn for votes dont sleep
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Old 01-16-04, 03:57 AM   #6
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I must ahve got you mixed up with someone else...
Give me a link to that battle..............................
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Old 01-16-04, 04:01 AM   #7
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Old 01-16-04, 04:17 AM   #8
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You're both wack. =) Now that's outta the way,

Technician - Did you plan on actually taking a stab at a punchline here? Here is all the filler contained in your verse.
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Most people learn there lesson the first time, but never B Kast
Schools back in session for the worst rhymes, get a seat fast
Said you stopped battlin' well you should'a stayed on the shelf
That verse was so bad you've got permission to hate on yaself
I'm only sonnin' you twice as , you need the critical critisizm
See.....submittin' that verse against me was just a pitifull desicion
U might as well seal ur own fate and withdraw from this rhyme fest
I dont want you to feel stoned hate but sorry your really no contest
I'm sorry to inform you but Aussi Hip Hop will never be Strictly ILL
I K.O.'d you the last Dance and now even better I see victory Still

Wow, how did you get over 5 wins?

B-kast - I don't know what erotic cousin loves does to you but yours wasn't all that dope either. Cum/Penis/Ejaculation lines = No no. Some of it doesn't make sense, you need more gooder-er English. It was slightly battle like and a less bit less self-proclaimation based. So...

V - The Tasmainian Cousin Fucker
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Old 01-16-04, 04:20 AM   #9
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^ right............but w/ever......uppn for more votes...........
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Old 01-16-04, 06:15 AM   #10
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sorry to freepopst but ROLMAO at the cousin fucker shit.......lol.........

gunna vote and B kast kinda mopped the floor....lol

he had actual proper punches ohter guy was okay but kast verse killed yours...

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Old 01-16-04, 06:21 AM   #11
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you both need to learn what a real punch is....

technician this is the first time you had no punches

Bkast you had punches but they were played...

due to that my vote is for B-Kast

both of you need some structure work too...maybe some lines
that werent as long

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Old 01-16-04, 09:45 AM   #12
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B-Kast~Played Punchlines
Technician~.......?
~That's what this whole battle looked like..
Illigal aliens running across the border..HORIBLE! HORIBLE!
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Old 01-18-04, 03:34 AM   #13
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Fuck you Inspire you goofy looking mardi grae fagget, im not even from Tasmania had to move here cause of family problems... got that off my chest

lol, i know im shit at text. But its not a priority to get any good at it.
Anyway upping for some votes to close this...
 
Old 01-18-04, 03:55 AM   #14
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Agree With Emerge... Tech Didnt Through Any HARD Punches..He Possibly Had One Or Two...But At Least B-Kast Threw More..Both Of You Had A Pretty Equal Stucture..

Vocab - Tie
Punches - B
Structure - Tie
Opener - B
Closer - B

Vote - B-Kast Just For Having A Better Overall Verse

Can You Two Drop An Honest Vote On This Sleepy Shit:
FuE-xIoN vs. Kaos Theory
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