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I forgot to check into the other one...so....

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Check in by: 09-29-05 at 10:28 PM

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Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-05 10:30 PM.

John Hensley. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-05 10:34 PM.

ok....my verse is posted.

Hurry up 'n post ur's mister RM legend.

You're wack man. i can't explain the hate.
You made a thread claimin you beat me..
.. then got laughed at for 4 pages straight.
You're nothin, i'll never say that you've been great.
Ya style is hate it or love it and...
I gotcha movin back, GOD i know you're shook.
Watch my fist get charged with identity theft, once it robs you of your looks.
Yea, you're gettin reigned on. but listen son.
It shouldn't be hard to find Shelter... considering ya family lives in one.
When the punches connect, it'll damage ya nose.
And the Direct Effect'll be so bad, MTV'll cancel the show.
12 lines huh? this is a keystyle kid. try n' get it.
I just hope u know i'm only writin this line to reach the line limit.

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OK.................................vote up bitches

checkin dem pollz............

^wat the hell?...LoL...vote!!..............haha...

Voted For: John Hensley.

Natural Killa

rainin' this fight 'n u came to the site wit hopes to dickride 'n taste queers
they say RV gay on RM...................so you 'n Classick decide to race here
I've never seen somebody on RM say this site is gay..
get ur face teared & spread the fact that u whack so u'll say u laying the truth
cus damn...I seen rooks in checkers with a better place in the game than you
Fuck no.. played to shit..
u delayin the boot...i'm here to kick you out...so it's time for the hurting
but then again,you the type to fly 'n soar with plane...................rhymes 'n verses
Had potential.. but your wording bombed it..
hidin behind the curtain..i'm takin u back to school..to get disected 'n burned
'n i don't make prom-misses....cus unlike u...i don't get rejected 'n spurned
This was just garbage..
selected to serve,ya shit ain't felt,I'ma merk u out the rankings 'n deride
& tell you to lay ya cards face down........if it wasn't blank on both sides
No.. just didn't connect..
'n i ain't all for rippin ya state...but i'm hosing you down...to crack 'n condemn
but in this battle........i'm str8 up washingtons of whackness right back to RM
You wash tons of wackness? That isn't even a punch.. forced wordplay..

John Hensely

You're wack man. i can't explain the hate.
You made a thread claimin you beat me..
.. then got laughed at for 4 pages straight.
Decent enough..
You're nothin, i'll never say that you've been great.
Ya style is hate it or love it and...


Lol.. cool..
I gotcha movin back, GOD i know you're shook.
Watch my fist get charged with identity theft, once it robs you of your looks.
Lmao.. I thought this was good..
Yea, you're gettin reigned on. but listen son.
It shouldn't be hard to find Shelter... considering ya family lives in one.
Haha.. Cool shit..
When the punches connect, it'll damage ya nose.
And the Direct Effect'll be so bad, MTV'll cancel the show.
Pretty sweet..
12 lines huh? this is a keystyle kid. try n' get it.
I just hope u know i'm only writin this line to reach the line limit.
Decent..

Man.. Natural Killa.. you are pretty much suck at wording punches.. your concepts are sub-par.. and @ that last wordplay.. whatever.. Hensley just came way better overall..

Vote - Hens.. face.

aah................ FUCK!!!!!!!!!

Checking this out....................................

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Voted For: John Hensley.

You're wack man. i can't explain the hate.
You made a thread claimin you beat me..
.. then got laughed at for 4 pages straight.
Yea, you're gettin reigned on. but listen son.
It shouldn't be hard to find Shelter... considering ya family lives in one.
When the punches connect, it'll damage ya nose.
And the Direct Effect'll be so bad, MTV'll cancel the show.

v.

'n i ain't all for rippin ya state...but i'm hosing you down...to crack 'n condemn
but in this battle........i'm str8 up washingtons of whackness right back to RM

v/ hensley

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Voted For: John Hensley.

Hensley:
You're wack man. i can't explain the hate.
You made a thread claimin you beat me..
.. then got laughed at for 4 pages straight.
Decent opener, but the simplicity hits 'cuz it's not mumbo-jumboed about with fancy wording and shit. It's direct, and that's what worked here.
You're nothin, i'll never say that you've been great.
Ya style is hate it or love it and...

Still decent
I gotcha movin back, GOD i know you're shook.
Watch my fist get charged with identity theft, once it robs you of your looks.
Lol was feeling this
Yea, you're gettin reigned on. but listen son.
It shouldn't be hard to find Shelter... considering ya family lives in one.
I've seen the "reign" play used before, but the second line made up for it.
When the punches connect, it'll damage ya nose.
And the Direct Effect'll be so bad, MTV'll cancel the show.
Lol another dope one.
12 lines huh? this is a keystyle kid. try n' get it.
I just hope u know i'm only writin this line to reach the line limit.
Seen this one also, but filler nontheless. Can understand why you'd use it though.

Natural Killa:
rainin' this fight 'n u came to the site wit hopes to dickride 'n taste queers
they say RV gay on RM...................so you 'n Classick decide to race here
There you go again with the unecessary crap that you use as "multis". Rainin' this fight? 2nd bar was...well it wasn't.
get ur face teared & spread the fact that u whack so u'll say u laying the truth
cus damn...I seen rooks in checkers with a better place in the game than you
About as fresh as a week-old bag of hot garbage.
u delayin the boot...i'm here to kick you out...so it's time for the hurting
but then again,you the type to fly 'n soar with plane...................rhymes 'n verses
Concept could've been worded to be dope, but you didn't seem to notice that.
hidin behind the curtain..i'm takin u back to school..to get disected 'n burned
'n i don't make prom-misses....cus unlike u...i don't get rejected 'n spurned
Played, but still could've been flipped to be better.
selected to serve,ya shit ain't felt,I'ma merk u out the rankings 'n deride
& tell you to lay ya cards face down........if it wasn't blank on both sides
Blah.
'n i ain't all for rippin ya state...but i'm hosing you down...to crack 'n condemn
but in this battle........i'm str8 up washingtons of whackness right back to RM
No. Worded crappy again.

It's evident Hens didn't drop up to his usual potential, but it's understandible. NK, on the other hand, came just as I predicted. Deflate your ego until you're at least remotely near as good as you say you are.

V//Hensley

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