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Old 03-29-04, 10:56 AM   #1
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triple_n vs. baronmynd

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deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.
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Old 03-30-04, 06:28 AM   #2
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its over. 16?
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Old 03-30-04, 07:15 AM   #3
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Motherfucker,

lose the thug-ish shit. or you’ll get laughed outta this place
& kicked to the groin so hard,
your future grandkids heads’ll be miss-shaped.
check that line in my sig … cause ima let you in on a secret,
LilKDogg’s wack as fuck, but YOU wopuldnt beat him.
and so the voters don’t get it twisted, ima let ‘em know ..
.. u bear the resemblance of Nasif, just w. slightly better flow.
i posted when id saw the threads up and typed my spit,
.. you’ll need the next two days just to pre-write ya shit.
so when ya finally done, & post what you’ve spent days running through
.. its gonna be hilarious when you STILL fucking lose!
you live in NYC, and that got me asking dude ..
how the FUCK someone from hiphop’s birthplace gon be as wack as you?
Kids still cyber sexing, never met a real broad..
.. how many relationships u had that DIDN’T involve a keyboard?
And I don’t know why I bothered cuz ya nothin, geek ..

& prolly an alias,

of some no name one of my fans coulda beat.
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Old 03-30-04, 10:06 PM   #4
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Yo, Fuck you and ever one that looks like you and that includes your mother too, Bitch!!!!!

Line for line your shit could never touch mine/
You got the right name baron mind/
Cause ya brain is as empty as your ryhmes/
You a punkass white boy who thinks his shit is tight/
Im a call u "scott's cause your soft and white"/
Ya whole verse had 2 punches, I eat those like snackable's lunches/
Sorry dogg u got no chance, stick to what sick in england and...
Continue to riverdance, and I did have a girl, it was ya mom/
I even took her to the prom, showed her the dick/
And shot missiles at her like she was saddam/
I kno at night u consumed by the sounds comin' from ya mom's bedroom/
Now you know it's just me shattering her womb/
Don't be mad, be glad, bloody hell your mom has a new lad/
Sorry Oppie, you'll just have to cope, wit the fact that my shit is dope/
you should have eloped, and after spittin' all that shit...
Being your daddy I demand u wash your mouth out wit soap/


Hold That u punkass wigga!!!!! 420 got it locked!!!!
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Old 03-30-04, 10:21 PM   #5
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I thought baron mind had the better punches better stuctcher......
he had better rhyme scheme........
he had better punches too......
triple-n you need some work because you didn't have no real punches......
no real structcher......
and no real rhyme scheme.......
but big ups to both of you.......

vote=baron mind

one love........
 
Old 03-30-04, 10:24 PM   #6
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lemme break it down

punches-Triple_n
Vocab-triple_n
structure-mynd
effort-triple_n
opener_mynd
closer-triple_n

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Old 03-31-04, 03:11 AM   #7
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baron myne won better punches and personals
both could work on vocab though
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Old 03-31-04, 10:15 AM   #8
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breakdown for triple_n:

flow: it was there but fell off in spots through out the middle you got to tighten that up but this was alright 6/10

volcab:good use nothing real special but 6/10

punches:good job of hittin at a personal level you hurt him with some of these lines like,"Im a call u "scott's cause your soft and white"/" that was funny shit good job 9/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for baronmynd:

flow:straight forward and never off point good job 7/10

volcabretty basic nothing special 6/10

punches:nice personals for the most part my fav,"how many relationships u had that DIDN’T involve a keyboard?" not a bad job addressing him from start to finish 7/10

overall:20/30 good verse

vote--close battle both swinging to hurt it's like you guys know each other with how personal you got good job but triple_n gets my vote
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Old 03-31-04, 11:33 AM   #9
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Vote- Triple N

This newbie voting be illin yo
 
Old 03-31-04, 12:02 PM   #10
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lol.

...........
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Old 03-31-04, 12:07 PM   #11
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Triple_N Had Better Flow, Vocab, Punches, Structure, & Creativity' .. I Was Likeing His Style..

Mynd Was Lacking On His Punches & Vocab.... But Your Shit Was Heated.. I Was Enjoying It!!!!!!! But For Me You Didn't Come Hard Enough

So There For My Vote Is With Triple_N (Propz Playa)
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Old 03-31-04, 02:18 PM   #12
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damm....very one sided......baryon mind took dis in every catogoriy......sorry nothing else to say...
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Old 03-31-04, 03:56 PM   #13
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Aight Check Dis...

BaronMynd: 6/10
Your Shit Was Aight, I Remember Seeing Your Name On Another Site, But Your Ish Was Better, Don't Know If You Copied Da Name Or What But W/E. Newayz...Good Punches and Solid Flow. Need Better Mulits and Metaphors. Good Drop Pimp.

Triple N: 5/10
I Wasn't Feeling Ya (Fake-Ass Punches) But.....Your Flow and Structure Was There. Word Usuage, Mulits, and Metaphors Need Worked On. Keep Elevating. Peace Pimp.

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Old 03-31-04, 06:59 PM   #14
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I gotta give this one to Baron Mynd. His shit flowed better and hit harder than Triple N's.........That's basically it

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Old 03-31-04, 07:12 PM   #15
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I enjoyed this battle and being that Baron gave respect I gotta give it back. Man u I liked that keyboard line, tight shit.
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