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Check In Due: Wendesday 10-08-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-10-03

In...

Going 10...

You'll finally have to drop a verse

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g'luck...


dont make me wait 44 years for your post..


dont act hard Ryan, you faked a prison sentance.. your whole gimmick is a con
i would go as far to say that you fell off, but thats impossible.. cuz you were never on
King Chrit? please, nothing more than a pawn.. fuck you and your 437 crews
i dont give props, plus im reluctant to touch your ass.. but i gotta hand it to you
im rippin this dude, Chrit is overrated, a nobody.. thats not opinion but a fact
im goin' all out on him, while still restraining Ryan..you could say im holding NOTHING back
this dudes wack, oops..there goes yet another not-so-secret leaking
dont shoot the messanger Chrit, im just saying what everyone is thinking
fuck this weakling, im goin the full mile, Ryan isnt even considered a hurddle
cause even with trophies all around him..hell never be in the winners circle!

Aight look...

Sorry Dez your still irrelevent... Add that to the fact your wack...
Hell I could build a whole career from the talent you lack...
Stick to audio Dez... vesus dead air is the only fair matchup...
Too bad you couldnt even get airplay joining the mile high club..
No more aliases Dez... you're like a second rate Camarac...
You even went indy to justify those FAGS whos back you pack...
Why even try?... Ya winning well ran dry... Like comedy from Will Farrel..
I'd son you but we all know... it was Mr. Scheel that made Dan Yell...
This shits over... Give me the belt... Dont even need votes to begin...
Cause we all know ya only quotable was what you posted as a check in

dont act hard Ryan, you faked a prison sentance.. your whole gimmick is a con
i would go as far to say that you fell off, but thats impossible.. cuz you were never on

not bad...2nd line played...
King Chrit? please, nothing more than a pawn.. fuck you and your 437 crews
i dont give props, plus im reluctant to touch your ass.. but i gotta hand it to you

eh...aiight....kinda sounded more gay then a punch
im rippin this dude, Chrit is overrated, a nobody.. thats not opinion but a fact
im goin' all out on him, while still restraining Ryan..you could say im holding NOTHING back

nice punch..
this dudes wack, oops..there goes yet another not-so-secret leaking
dont shoot the messanger Chrit, im just saying what everyone is thinking

decent....
fuck this weakling, im goin the full mile, Ryan isnt even considered a hurddle
cause even with trophies all around him..hell never be in the winners circle!

played punch...but works for a closer

Sorry Dez your still irrelevent... Add that to the fact your wack...
Hell I could build a whole career from the talent you lack...
good wordplay on the 1st line...decent punch on 2nd
Stick to audio Dez... vesus dead air is the only fair matchup...
Too bad you couldnt even get airplay joining the mile high club..
lol...nice wordplay...good punch
No more aliases Dez... you're like a second rate Camarac...
You even went indy to justify those FAGS whos back you pack...
aiight....not bad...coulda been better
Why even try?... Ya winning well ran dry... Like comedy from Will Farrel..
I'd son you but we all know... it was Mr. Scheel that made Dan Yell...
funny...also noticed the wordplay in the first too...good
This shits over... Give me the belt... Dont even need votes to begin...
Cause we all know ya only quotable was what you posted as a check in
good closer..even though u freaked a played punch..but it
still worked


Good battle to both....no hate here.....Dez..u had nice wordplay
and decent punches...but u had a couple of played lines in there...
not bad personals by the way.....Chrit...u also had nice wordplay
and good punches....i seen like 1 played line in there..(the closer)
but....i think it was enough to pull off the win...close battle.....
but Dez lacked more originality then u.

Vote=Chrit

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Vote Dez

I gotta be honest here.. i though Dez had a couple more decent
punches than Chrit did... this wasn't very entertaining & no "ooh"
& "ahh" punches... but i still felt Dez had the better of the two

Exactly^^

This was nothin too special......i've seen WAY better from both......there was no real punch that made you go DAYUM that was hard......it was all simplistic both had a few played concepts.......but in terms of who had the better verse....im goin with Dez...a couple nice personal lines and some nice punches

Vote DEZ

Yeah, pretty much the same opinion i have, Dez brought more of the 'ooh' factor than chrit, more original lines / concepts etc, Chrits opening bar was actually pretty decent, but after that he didnt bring a lot that caught my eye,
`i dont give props, plus im reluctant to touch your ass.. but i gotta hand it to you

im goin' all out on him, while still restraining Ryan..you could say im holding NOTHING back`

^ two nice concepts, but horribly worded and the bars were stretched and fucked up your flow, work on them mayne.

Votebacks to the wall

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Hmmm....

I think this was a decent battle...Chrit had a nice
opener...that's was about it... Dez had maybe 2 or 3
punches that stood out...so i think imma go wit dez
for better punches and also for the fact he was more
consistent through out. . .

Vote = W-ill Far-ill

I think both came pretty played, ...lol^

Both trowed some , decent punches,...with some nice structured, ...^^verses,...
wordplay was nice from both, ...and personals , were there olso,...
but i think chrit edged Dez, ...wit a few harder punches,...

But ive seen way better from u both lol^

Vote = What?...(Chrit)

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aite ill break this down by points. 5/10 is a reg line w/ no punch.
+1 if it has multies... then ill add however good i thought the punch was. +1 for avg +2 for good +3 for the best there is. nothing for flow, if it dont flow ill take one off...
like that system? good!

dont act hard Ryan, you faked a prison sentance.. your whole gimmick is a con
i would go as far to say that you fell off, but thats impossible.. cuz you were never on
^seen that concept AT LEAST five times. 5/10. nothing for the punch.. as its flipped.. like whoa..

King Chrit? please, nothing more than a pawn.. fuck you and your 437 crews
i dont give props, plus im reluctant to touch your ass.. but i gotta hand it to you
+1 for the punch. 6/10
uh.. pawn line wasnt nuthin special...i get the second punch.. but it didnt hit.

im rippin this dude, Chrit is overrated, a nobody.. thats not opinion but a fact
im goin' all out on him, while still restraining Ryan..you could say im holding NOTHING back
liked it...
8/10 great punch.

this dudes wack, oops..there goes yet another not-so-secret leaking
dont shoot the messanger Chrit, im just saying what everyone is thinking
creative= +1.... 6/10

fuck this weakling, im goin the full mile, Ryan isnt even considered a hurddle
cause even with trophies all around him..hell never be in the winners circle!
lol, good. 7/10

=32/50

Sorry Dez your still irrelevent... Add that to the fact your wack...
Hell I could build a whole career from the talent you lack...
lol.. 8/10 took me awhile to get it...but i did...

Stick to audio Dez... versus dead air is the only fair matchup...
Too bad you couldnt even get airplay joining the mile high club..
didnt rhyme well enuf = -1 = 4/10

No more aliases Dez... you're like a second rate Camarac...
You even went indy to justify those FAGS whos back you pack...
lol, a second rate cam. 5/10 +1 for punch = 6/10

Why even try?... Ya winning well ran dry... Like comedy from Will Farrel..
I'd son you but we all know... it was Mr. Scheel that made Dan Yell...
+2 punchs = 7/10

This shits over... Give me the belt... Dont even need votes to begin...
Cause we all know ya only quotable was what you posted as a check in
+2 good punch tho lil played... = 7/10

=32/50
hoes it ended a tie now im gonna go by the ohh damn! factor...
however many times i say oh damn, that person wins.

= one for both. hoes now what am i gonna judge?

wow, im going by less played...
and, dezyir is more played..by two lines..
sry i had to go by that, but...nothin else much left...



vote= CHRIT

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