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01-01-04, 08:12 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Ju Fuckin Cacaroach!!!!!
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A second chance - Baron mynd Product of da slums -Lyrikal Jezus Ney Keystyle -T Lite This is some shit dat i just keyed with a certain fuckin traitor in my mind.... peep and critique Thought u was down- neva knew youd be a snake in da grass// a fuckin clown- 2 my face u fakin shakin my hand// in my absence come 2 find out- u stabin my back// Now im at a conflict i dont know how i should react// U one of my closest friends- my dogg- my fam on da other hand -i cant jus stand- and let dis shit slide// Cuz what could happen- is motha fuckas witness it and follow it by example// i dont know why u think -u can play me for a hoe// actin friendly 2 my face- but then u shady on da low// appear out of thin air -when I start flamin my dro// So FUCK IT!-I have 2 decide 2 sever all ties// first step of dis process- might be a left to ya eye// fuck ya back up- ill crack ya- in spite of ya guys// till i get cuffed up- and stuffed up- for incitin a riot// Best believe- when i post bail -dat ass is mine// now ya house- got da worst smell- cuz theres a corpse inside// |
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01-01-04, 08:45 AM | #2 | ||||||
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i aint sure about this u know...there are some bits where im thinking like yeah dats good u know, but den there are other parts and im thinkin....nah!!
and i didnt really like tha end...should have put more detail into shit man |
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01-01-04, 08:48 AM | #3 | ||||
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you need to put 3 links to 3 previous battle that you have read other wise this thread will get closed other than that i really wasnt feeling this at all.. but keep at it kid dont give up, you'll get there aventualy..
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01-01-04, 08:50 AM | #4 | ||||
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Shoot Sorry i did not see you put the "topic you replied 2" i was looking for links.. that that its my business or anything just trying to help out thats all.. anyways 5 out of 10 is what i rate your peice
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01-02-04, 12:37 AM | #5 | ||||||
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umm.. it was iight. it got kinda boring and stuff. i dunno... 6/10
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01-02-04, 01:16 AM | #6 | ||||||
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Yo son that was tight and I can relate too lol
flow was tight,vocab was aight and all around good shit Love the title lol gimme some feedback on my new one called Baaaad Day ~1~ |
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