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05-06-07, 01:20 PM | #1 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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Enemies x 3
IP: B4EB 5C31
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^Click on "Enemies x 3" Beat: Nino beats Hook: Q Verses: All Q Concept: Building in intensity as I address foes...x 3 Braggin type track holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242019 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242013 |
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05-06-07, 03:26 PM | #2 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 1E4C ADC7
alright i talked to you on aim about this one
I think your flowon heres crazy how you keep switching it up between slow and fast. Hooks a little complicated, I dont think its something most people would have stuck in there heads tbh.. Rest of the lyrics are cool, but your flow was tight here... Beat was tight to
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05-06-07, 06:00 PM | #3 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: E74B 3D80
damn this is crazy man... like i told ya before man u remind me a lot of Tech N9ne and thaz my fav Rapper so that explains a lot..
1st verse is crazy flow.. hook is pretty nice couple words seemed forced ... 2nd verse liken how ya slowed it down some sick sick.. 3rd verse still sick sick man and the beat is real nice tight work Tech i mean Q lol rate this 8.5/10 |
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05-06-07, 08:38 PM | #4 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
preciate da feed homeboys
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05-07-07, 12:19 AM | #5 | |||
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IP: C248 9E60
alright lemme get some feed on here
always open with the same line in the intro to every song..at least its noticeable so i know its you im likin this beat..real laid back and everything. im guessing that was the hook? not really catchy.. verse 1 comes in real nice..i like this..keeps me interested with the switch ups. the only thing is that when you have this flow in your songs, you seem to lack the energy that you have with more simple flows. hook again is nothing spectacular verse 2 comes in again. flow is cool on this verse as well. i think thats definitely your strong point..by the way this beat is dope. i like how you work it not really likin the beginning of verse 3. it sounds like either youre lagging or youre just off with the flow. i like the least overall i like this. the only thing i thought was lackin was the chorus.. |
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05-07-07, 11:42 AM | #6 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 47F3 E0A2
eeeeeeeeeeeeer up
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05-07-07, 04:08 PM | #7 | |||||||
Broke as hell
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IP: E0B7 5677
damn this is nice Q...i like the beat you chose..
the hook is nice here...and your quality is amazing..one of hte best on the site.. your flow is unstoppable....all fast and stuff...nice nice....you got good lyrics to my man..keep it going...
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05-08-07, 05:29 AM | #8 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
preciate da feed man
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05-08-07, 08:03 PM | #9 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 52B3 3524
Listening...
Beat is fucking tight. Quality is really nice and crisp. Hook comes in slower, but it suits the track nicely. Whoa...flow on the verse is ballistic. Very nice. Nice work on syllables...damn man, you have really worked on your shit. Lyrics are pretty nice on this too...had some nice shit in there. I love the beat...you have to give me a link to these guys. Some banging shit man...keep it up. -Downloads That Q to Moto Q- |
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05-08-07, 08:08 PM | #10 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 52B3 3524
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05-09-07, 04:52 AM | #11 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
eeeeeeeeeeeer up
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05-09-07, 04:20 PM | #12 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 47F3 E0A2
eeeeeeeeeeeer up
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05-09-07, 05:40 PM | #13 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
eeeeeeeeeeer up
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05-09-07, 09:35 PM | #14 | |||
Addicted
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IP: 6ABD 581C
hook is aight.....flow is aight i like your other flow.....delivery is cool lyrics is coo...hook needs to be lil louder....next verse ur flow is aight now i like the first verse lol....ight the third verse is wierd i dunno if i like this it was too abstract for me but its still coo for wut it is.....yup we got totally different sstyles....you got that underground style i got that mainstream westcoast floww.....this shit was coo you stay up =1=
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05-10-07, 05:19 AM | #15 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
preciate da feed
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