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02-16-04, 07:09 PM | #1 | ||
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New song please leave feed back
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be harsh if needed
Check it out drop some feedback on this thred http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/mcshadow13music.htm |
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02-16-04, 07:12 PM | #2 | ||
Flyweight
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02-16-04, 07:17 PM | #3 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
a that 1 was also jacked the frist 1 works
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02-16-04, 09:07 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
Aight listnin now.....i luv thiz beat.....wtf.....damn kid you soundin young az fuck....
thatz good tho, u startin young.....feelin yah wordz tho, some real shit....but yah needa up yah emotion and delivery a whooooooole lot....but you still young ( I assume) so you gotz time 2 elevate.....the 2nd cat juzt soundz wack tho...he tryna spit 2 fast and can't do it, he soundz young too tho...hard 2 understand some of the wordz....propz on the real shit tho keep it up yo and return the luv on my track below http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114758 Last edited by Tr0ublesome : 02-16-04 at 09:08 PM. Reason: i forgot 2 comment on the 2nd cat rappin |
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02-16-04, 09:57 PM | #5 | |
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IP:
i know your young, and its for your uncle, but this wasnt good.
you have no emotion at all...and memorize your raps, dont read them off paper. your waaaay off beat, and your lyrics are weak(<i understand your yuong so i wont make a big deal of it) and the 2nd guy is wack, i dont know what the hell he is saying |
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03-01-04, 12:05 PM | #6 | |
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IP:
thats pretty hot man...keep it up
return the favor: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115598
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