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06-09-06, 06:00 PM | #1 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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Because Of You - Love song.....been awhile
IP: 2372 BC06
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Yea I made this for my ex, see if I could get her back on her birthday and today the 9th is her birthday. I gave her it but I don't know what she thinks yet. Let me know if y'all think it was good enough cause it coulda been better lol. Left feed on: Apexx's "formality" and Key's track with Q and deuce.
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06-09-06, 06:12 PM | #2 | ||||||
Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
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ayo para you want in on our topical league were creating its permanent and reliable me and appo and troop are running it!
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06-09-06, 06:34 PM | #3 | ||||||
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the beat was cool the flow was a lil off somewhat slow but nice words and rythm,,
this was a nice mix....just felt like you stuttered a step or two but nice overall!
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06-10-06, 03:32 PM | #4 | |||||||
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no no no dont make songs for ex's b...lol than they gonna start sayin 'that dude will never move on"..lol
its cool track lyrics was catchy emotions are felt on this, u were off on some parts....but the rest was cool laid back
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06-12-06, 06:51 PM | #5 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
thanks, I disagree about my emotion though.
uppin
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06-15-06, 11:24 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: FFF8 F801
word, i tried this once, to get an ex back.
quality could be better. i dont like how you talked over the hook. flow was off and on. more off then on though. lyrics were ehhhh. "id knit you a sweater, but i dont know hoowwww" no. lol. dont EVER extend your words to flow. especially when it didnt flow in the first place. and get more into your recording and the outcome will be a lot better. upgrade your equipment too who made this beat? ive heard it before but i dont remember the producer good looks, hit up my track!
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06-21-06, 03:12 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 2372 BC06
nice, uppin....ignorant, ignorant but I will get there when I feel like it.
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