10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No DR Votes
No Feeding
Due By Tomorrow Midnight

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yo in the meantime you wanna vote on some of my battles, i got waaay too many open.

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lol.. ok im here, shits due by tomorrow night though.. i don't wanna start this until i close some of my other stuff.. hopefully it'll be up by tonight.

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uppin for sten cell, this shit still on right? just check in and ill spit mine sometime soon.

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whatever, here's my drop:

sten cell like bruce willis, cats about to die hard
each time i spit a bar, i leave you scarred, n ego charred
even if your rubber suit was on, my rhymes too hot to adjust to
n even if my rhymes was a dime a dozen you could afford just two
you drop so man trash lines you get picked up for littering
while my rhymes like acid, leave a bitter sting
bitch confess, you just can’t match the skills I possess
i seen you get merked by herbs, this shit is just excess
sten-cell an L onto your record, then trace 10 times
cuz i got you merked with each of my lines

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uppin for sten cell ^^ does it actually take you 48 hours to write 5 bars?

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This Is Why I Waited.I Didnt Forget.Im Eatin So Ill Post Up In A Few.I Might Be A Couple Minutes Late

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lol with this amount of time you better slay me

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Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle/
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow/
X-Cell?Please Tell This Kid Right Clicks Wont Get By This/
Bitch I De-Light "Nice" Kids' Brightness With Tight Politeness/
Kid Dont Fight It,Your Suited For A Bruisin Like White Tie & Tails/
Its Easy To Tell Your Tastin De-Feet Like Bitin Toe Nails/
Ya Flows Sloppy By Far,No Monopoly Cards So Prepare To Post Bails/
Get Use To These Bars Cuz Ya Locked In Cells' Like County Jails/
Hasty?I Post Lazily But Im Bringin In The 'W' A Lot Quicker/
Faze Me?This Kids' Crazy But I Crack More Nuts Then A Broken Snickers/

My Fault I Got Caught Up In A Movie.

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Really nice drop man, got real nice multis but you gotta work on your punches a bit I think.. like I gotta work on my wordplay to get where you at

uppin for votes people ^

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sten cell like bruce willis, cats about to die hard
each time i spit a bar, i leave you scarred, n ego charred
Nice meta, multi's, and a decent punch...good opener 9/10
even if your rubber suit was on, my rhymes too hot to adjust to
n even if my rhymes was a dime a dozen you could afford just two
Another decent punch...no multis...no personals....6/10
you drop so man trash lines you get picked up for littering
while my rhymes like acid, leave a bitter sting
Nice punch...good metaphor....10/10
bitch confess, you just can’t match the skills I possess
i seen you get merked by herbs, this shit is just excess
Nice multi's and a decent punch in there...8/10
sten-cell an L onto your record, then trace 10 times
cuz i got you merked with each of my lines
Coulda closed a little better....6/10

Verse Score
39/50

Okay your verse was an overall hot spit...liked your metaphors....work on using some personals cause that will bring up your punches....Work on multis...Your elevatin alot kid...Like readin ya shit... Keep up the elevation...

Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle/
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow/
Nice multi's...nice lil metaphor in there...good opener....9/10
X-Cell?Please Tell This Kid Right Clicks Wont Get By This/
Bitch I De-Light "Nice" Kids' Brightness With Tight Politeness/
Hot multi's and a decent punch....7/10
Kid Dont Fight It,Your Suited For A Bruisin Like White Tie & Tails/
Its Easy To Tell Your Tastin De-Feet Like Bitin Toe Nails/
Werd....HOT punch...nice multi's....10/10
Ya Flows Sloppy By Far,No Monopoly Cards So Prepare To Post Bails/
Get Use To These Bars Cuz Ya Locked In Cells' Like County Jails/
Another good punch with nice multis and a metaphor...8/10
Hasty?I Post Lazily But Im Bringin In The 'W' A Lot Quicker/
Faze Me?This Kids' Crazy But I Crack More Nuts Then A Broken Snickers/
Hot closer...with nice multi's...liked it...8/10

Verse Score
42/50

Okay your verse came harder than shadows....U need to work on using personals....Your def awesome at using multis....Work on hard hitting punches...u had a couple but still work on your punches....nice battle though...

BOTH HAD AWESOME SPITS
keep elevatin cuz yall will be fuckin hot

VOTE - STEN

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

aight thanks for the good feedback man.. yeah i gotta work on multis... uppin ^^

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1-0 Me
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