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03-06-09, 12:51 AM | #1 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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Miles Apart (Demo) - Young Kidd/D. Tanksley
IP: 8976 C480
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03-06-09, 08:59 PM | #2 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: F130 A2E3
you sound like your too close to the mic at the beg....to much boom in ya breathy voiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....take a step back when you try n get sexy on the mic!
hook needs more layers you prolly should layer it if its not you singing already on there in editing....cuz out every deep breath...it will clean up the quick flow....but this was some okay shit, but ive become acoustemed to hearing better shit from you....so step it up
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03-06-09, 11:33 PM | #3 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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IP: B207 C46E
lol this is the demo. i was a little to close though.
thanks for the feed. haha. yea we decided to take the hook a different direction when we do it really.
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