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Old 05-13-05, 02:48 PM   #1
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Ax Dogg vs Aurora Sky

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Old 05-13-05, 02:49 PM   #2
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Old 05-13-05, 03:00 PM   #3
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If there was sumtihn worst than my battle with Ca$per was your verse against this master
you gon be murdered faster and nastier than the shots on Ol' Dirty Bastard
Before you rap about lips again make shure you take my tips my friend
For this to be intersting it will depend on how fast you wanna get to your end
let me guess...... "you don't have a cadillac" and you think I will give a fuck about that
"then I will murder you with my mack" there is another topic of things you can rap
your verse against bonecollector was ntuhing but he's ugly and gots big lips
by ur nickname I bet you are a bitch that doesn't even have nice hips
post ur picture too so I can laugh too..........
you a wack ass nigga and that's the true............
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Old 05-13-05, 03:01 PM   #4
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Old 05-13-05, 03:07 PM   #5
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You Gona Lose, you wack, its not cuz the people you battle its cuz the skill you lack/

This kids a punk, and he rightfully is, cuz his raps is wack like that site in his sig/

Son dont say you nice unless you are, and ya punches r like that guy in the box, cuz they wont get you far/

Between me and you, who's more crazy, messin wit me, ill leave ya with no teeth like a new born baby/

Watch this fag get smothered, and ya name represents ya skill if you take away the x add an ass than add another/
(Ax-x+s+s=ASS)

bah was gona come hard but than casper wants to battle so i gotta focus on that....
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Old 05-13-05, 03:09 PM   #6
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whoops...its suppose to be add an s than another....fuck
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Old 05-13-05, 03:22 PM   #7
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ok we need sum votes on here....... this battle will let me know who the haters are, BITCHES!!!!!
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Old 05-13-05, 03:37 PM   #8
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Voted For: Aurora Sky

a.sky:
You Gona Lose, you wack, its not cuz the people you battle its cuz the skill you lack/
^^^PRETTY BASIC...BUT DIS WAS OAKY

This kids a punk, and he rightfully is, cuz his raps is wack like that site in his sig/
^^^COOL PERSONAL...NOTHIN HARD HITTIN

Son dont say you nice unless you are, and ya punches r like that guy in the box, cuz they wont get you far/
^^^WHUT GUY R U TALKIN BOUT FAM???...EXPLAIN YA BAR'S

Between me and you, who's more crazy, messin wit me, ill leave ya with no teeth like a new born baby/
^^^^^PLAYED...I LIKE DA RYHME SCHEME THO

Watch this fag get smothered, and ya name represents ya skill if you take away the x add an ass than add another/ (Ax-x+s+s=ASS)
^^^GOOD PERSONAL AND CLOSER....U HAD A SOLID VERSE U DIDN'T REALLY SHOW NO CREATIVIE THO AND FIX UR STRUCTURE ALOT OF PPL AINT GON BE ABLE 2 READ IT

ax dogg:
If there was sumtihn worst than my battle with Ca$per was your verse against this master
you gon be murdered faster and nastier than the shots on Ol' Dirty Bastard
^^^WACK.....Y R DISSIN A HIP HOP LEGEND??...U STUPID ASS NIGGA
Before you rap about lips again make shure you take my tips my friend
For this to be intersting it will depend on how fast you wanna get to your end
^^^^STRETCHED...AND IT WAS WEAK

let me guess...... "you don't have a cadillac" and you think I will give a fuck about that
"then I will murder you with my mack" there is another topic of things you can rap
^^^STRETCHED AGAIN...Y R YA BARS SO LONG???

your verse against bonecollector was ntuhing but he's ugly and gots big lips
by ur nickname I bet you are a bitch that doesn't even have nice hips
^^^WACK
post ur picture too so I can laugh too..........
you a wack ass nigga and that's the true
^^^YA BEST BAR IN YA WHOLE VERSE..AND IT WAS WACK 2 LOL...

V/SKY....DIS BATTLE WAS WUN SIDED...
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Old 05-13-05, 05:40 PM   #9
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that's sum fake shit.... but whatever I can do nuthin against voters or haters... fuck it...
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Old 05-13-05, 05:55 PM   #10
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Ax Dogg

If there was sumtihn worst than my battle with Ca$per was your verse against this master
you gon be murdered faster and nastier than the shots on Ol' Dirty Bastard
^good opener

Before you rap about lips again make shure you take my tips my friend
For this to be intersting it will depend on how fast you wanna get to your end
^coo coo, no punch though

let me guess...... "you don't have a cadillac" and you think I will give a fuck about that
"then I will murder you with my mack" there is another topic of things you can rap
^okay bar

your verse against bonecollector was ntuhing but he's ugly and gots big lips
by ur nickname I bet you are a bitch that doesn't even have nice hips
^nice one

post ur picture too so I can laugh too..........
you a wack ass nigga and that's the true............
^bleh @ your closer

Okay verse, had some punches in there and personals as well. Flow was off here and there, vocab was good but try to get more creative and hardhitting punches in there next time. Everything was rather basic, you should've word some stuff in another way and you would've had an excellent punch. No hate...structure wasn't all that either and what was up with the closer?


Aurora Sky

You Gona Lose, you wack, its not cuz the people you battle its cuz the skill you lack/
^hehe, nice opener

This kids a punk, and he rightfully is, cuz his raps is wack like that site in his sig/
^coo coo

Son dont say you nice unless you are, and ya punches r like that guy in the box, cuz they wont get you far/
^hehe, funny

Between me and you, who's more crazy, messin wit me, ill leave ya with no teeth like a new born baby/
^lolz...okay line

Watch this fag get smothered, and ya name represents ya skill if you take away the x add an ass than add another/ (Ax-x+s+s=ASS)
^funny closer

Cool verse right here, got a different style of rhyming and building up your verse than more cats on this site. Good hardhitting punches, personal in closer , flow was good and structure was different but cool. Creativity was there, might be a bit better next time maybe...work on that...overall, good battle verse...
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Old 05-14-05, 09:16 AM   #11
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Old 05-14-05, 09:45 AM   #12
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Voted For: Aurora Sky

votin for aurora

ight lil weak battle but Aurora gets it due to harder punches

Aurora ya punches were basic, ya had good flow and descet strucutre, didnt see any multies or any heavey personals so ya got to elevate on those(ersonals, harder punches, multies)
ya wordplay was basic and creatvity was lacking all n all the punche u had saved ya ass

Ax
ya punches were very unreal man u opened wsayin sumtin bout Ca$per that threw ya whole verse off ya structure was choopy but ya flow was descent i didnt see any personals that were hard hittin and ya wordplay was basic and no creativity

bouth elevtae on personals, creativity, punches

good battle
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Old 05-14-05, 01:09 PM   #13
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Weak battle,honestly...seems ta me netha wun of u was tryin....i seen no punches...multis...vocab was basic...structure was off on both verses but still readable ta me.....my vote goes ta Ax cuz i can tell he put a lil more time then sky in his verse...plus his was more of a diss....

not really much tho explain....just elevate to both emcees and take more time...Sky u said u hadda battle casper? well u shouldve did that before u came to battle Ax...excuses wont get u a vote,its ya rhymes that get em.
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Old 05-14-05, 05:42 PM   #14
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lol it wasnt an exuse , we both wrote are verses in like 10 minutes, so we spent no time, and btw, im not hateing but your verses are to gangsta, talkin bout guns n shit, my opinion but yea... so -----------upppinnnn------
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Old 05-14-05, 10:13 PM   #15
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