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05-27-05, 11:16 AM | #1 | ||||||
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To drink wine is like to think blind get drunk wanna fight
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To drink wine is like to think blind get drunk wanna fight
So that junk is not right so lot of punks don’t be tight When I verbally dispatch major verse must attach flavor First to waste thug’s taste buds can’t match this behavior Got a crazy crew but like crazy glue they stick fast And quick crash micro phones like plane wrecks, blast Words and trash nerds like garbage with this college rap Knowledge perhaps is a weapon every second, stay trapped In the glamour of Grammar in this mamma jamma like flap Jacks at IHOPP, in my Lex roll mostly and hold closely A girl in a mini-skirt wanna do plenty work on the pies so toasty In the past toted a glock but still devoted to the block Promoted a lot of crap through rap wear a true cap and hard knock Like JAY-Z the thug but crazy in love with my cutie fiancé bold With the booty like Beyonce’ Knoll many kissing stories untold |
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05-27-05, 11:35 AM | #2 | ||||||
this time, lets just pretend ur as good as me...
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hmm...I like the flow in this..it would keep the reader interested...I just read it because of that and if u can do that then that's good..but since I only read it like dat I didn't really catch any of the metaphors and what not..but this is good...
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05-27-05, 11:39 AM | #3 | ||||||
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peeped this link right here (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192664)
EsKalayde thanks for reading this right here homet for real |
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