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Beat: Epik the dawn productions
Intro sample: From the movie, "Terminator 2"...www.soundamerica.com
Hook: Tha Q
Lyrics: Verses 1 & 2 Tha Q

Concept: I'm rapping about events that'll take place in the year 2020...Many events I mention are factual, some are my predictions.

I included my lyrics for the first time ever so you can mull over them.

PS...I still don't have a set up. So, the quality isn't great. Also, I have no way to fade out at the end. That's why my last few tracks have ended abruptly.



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237444








Verse 1

The year is 20 20, and it's a leap year
The number countries go back to 193 because
Taiwan becomes China's, in Gregorian Calendar
It's 20 20, in Hindu it's 5122
The number killed when that stadium got hit during half-time
Land mines planted killed a franchise
The year humans flew a space ship to lunar ruins
To moon walk like Michael, while Russian Agencies
Mine isotopes like helium-3, the flight of the Voyagers
End then, the new engines are powered by fission, reactors
The Future Force Warriors dispatched for practice
Fidel Castro commemorated, been nearly a decade
Since the cancer ate him now the people free from sanction
New York to host the olympics, Schapelle Corby
Gets released from prison so, Indonesia's in a fever


Hook: 2x

It's like 20/20 vision son, my retina regrets
What it saw, 2020 gonna be the death of y'all
I stand in awe, how God protects his man and all
But 2020, his hand deflects, damn the fall



Verse 2

Denzel becomes the first black president
A sniper tried to clip his life up, but the kid was hesistant
Shot the secretary of state, and Yahoo's time capsule
Is opened to reveal our news, lacks the facts, uh
Darryl Strawberry, the hall of fame
But what a shame baseball was the game they lost
And the draft came back, on the day Iraq
Became the same like 'Nam, yet the same for blacks
On the front line, fact is we lost that war
Pride became a factor, the thing that cost us more
Than the war itself, damn I'm rantin' and ravin'
But 20/20 gonna be the year of satan
The population coerced to wear implants
Your I.D., bank accounts, damn to even buy stamps
And the cars won't fly, but the cards don't lie
Or falsify the holocaust, caused by the bulk of us
uh

this beat is cooo i like this.....flow is coo i like the lyrics in the song but i think the first verse coulda came off smoother...hook is coo i like this concept........second verse too me sounded better than the first....imma be waitin for satin in 2020 word.....overall this track was coo gud idea lyrics = gud jus the quality aint up to par we need to collab on sum concept shit

Well, the beat is damn mesmerizing, you completely demolish the beat. The hook is ill. The double meaning of 20/20 was utilized very well in the hook.


Pride became a factor, the thing that cost us more
Than the war itself, damn I'm rantin' and ravin'
But 20/20 gonna be the year of satan
The population coerced to wear implants
Your I.D., bank accounts, damn to even buy stamps
And the cars won't fly, but the cards don't lie
Or falsify the holocaust, caused by bulk of us
uh


^^ Shit was wicked.

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this is problay the best song i've heard from you..if you had that better set up i think that this right here woudl be album worthy track........

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first verse idk flow doest seem to smooth to me in places
2nd verse same


idk your flow wasnt off but it wasnt smooth to me ionno lyrics were cool

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^^U know what I think is happening? When I record, there's an echo in my headphones and a slight lag. I think that's affecting how my vocals are getting laid on the track. When I spit, my lyrics sound fine to me. But, when they are recorded, it's slightly off in spots due to that issue. I'm not sure. But, I'm also trying new schemes and ways to spit my lyrics. It's all a journey.




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Hmmm, this song is ok. Maybe alot of it was over my head or something but i didn't feel it as much as i feel some of your other songs.

Denzel first president...
stadium hit with landmines at half time...

Wow the chorus wasn't spectacularly catchy to me. Overall was an ok track. Made my head hurt for some reason though. well, not your best but i'll go 6/10 with this one.

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