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12-22-03, 10:50 PM | #1 | |||||||
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS: The Mind Of A Battle MC
IP: C1DA C961
Strategize, ostracize, eliminating ya flows/
Its tyme to show these rookies just how this rap shyt goes/ Putting holes throo ya verse like I did throo ya cloths/ And get off into the wind like which way did he go/ I don't carry a scent so dude don't bring ya dogs/ Aint like u can see me anyway, im night crawler to ya'll/ I want u to die extra slow like u sick wit sars/ Just because im soft spoken im still down for the cause/ Like layin you and ya crew out on the blvd Matter fact I seen ya girl, ya she still on tha balls/ Can you still taste my dick In her mouth? U better examine them jaws/ Cum stains in her eye exact hit no flaws/ Matter fact looking the mail I just sent back her draws/ Im bout to be all over ya ass like body painters/ Tearin apart ya ligaments shyt rip like paper/ Im runnin on octane like I swallowed some rocket fuel/ You aint winnin this battle dude, u don?t carry the tools/ You don't carry the right equipment/ to dismantle this mental chemist/ so see, after this verse is finished/ watch ya reputation ever so slowly diminish/ ya names no longer valid in this battle of malice/ why don't u spit some gangsta shyt and try to show me some talent/ cause the shyt I heard thus far aint worth my ballet/- S.S.
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. Last edited by Spike Sanders : 12-23-03 at 04:38 PM. |
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12-22-03, 11:10 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 19AF 50C1
LOL THIS WAS DIFFERENT AND ILL YOU ATTACKED THE SUBJECT AS WELL AS OTHERS.
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12-22-03, 11:32 PM | #3 | ||||
Word.
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IP: 9C1E 2B43
You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.
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12-22-03, 11:55 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 4584 DED9
good drop.
i think the structure definitely was a lil weak but other than that it was hot. I like the imagery and the worplay, take a lil more time to check your grammar and ish. Great subject, I like the street appeal. I ain't on that nerd shit. Keep it crackin! |
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12-23-03, 12:17 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
REPLIED TO:
WORD~P- uninhabited RULE- Memory Lane VISCOSITY- The Diary Of A Thug come on niggaz dont sleep on this.
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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12-23-03, 12:18 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
uppin for some feedback.....
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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12-23-03, 12:30 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 0143 454D
your vocab was good, structure was weak... but the content
was different and I liked that... your flow was good despite a weak structure... this is not by far the best I've read from you but a good peice never the less. |
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12-23-03, 12:42 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
thx for the feedback A.T..
UPPIN.
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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12-23-03, 03:34 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
UPPIN....................
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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12-23-03, 03:42 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 1B3B C284
this was good you had some good metas and nice lines pretty funny in some parts good drop man keep it up
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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12-23-03, 04:40 PM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
yo thx for the feed back niggas.
uppin.......
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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12-23-03, 05:01 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 7BBC 5E47
Yeah, man, sick drop.....everything was on tack except for(as noted) your structure.All it requires is some work but none-the-less, good drop.....nice wordplay with the metaphors and such...
Peep this, if you could...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...502#post1011502
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MC Murdera' (RB's "ill" MCs) Otherwise known as Artikulate |
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12-23-03, 06:49 PM | #13 | |||||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
thx for the feedback.
uppin.....
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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12-23-03, 07:06 PM | #14 | ||||||
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IP: 876B B31A
Spike Sanders at Urban Flows?
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12-24-03, 02:50 PM | #15 | |||||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
UPPIN............ CMON QUIT SLEEPIN MUTHAFUCKAS.........DAMN!!!!
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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