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Old 07-22-04, 08:18 AM   #1
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Ghost - Can I get some feedback please!

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Yo can I get some feedback on my track G.H.O.S.T. please? My first ever audio and the quality of the recording and flow are off accordingly, especially at the beginning... just let me know how I can improve! thanks

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Old 07-22-04, 11:36 AM   #2
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I couldn't understand much.

remind me of myself back in the day.sometimes present. try an kill the echo so u dont drown yourself out.

also. slow down. an emphasize the last words in each bar...helps u flow better...
define your lines.

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Old 07-22-04, 02:58 PM   #3
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iight thanks man... that's the kind of constructive criticism i need!
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Old 07-23-04, 03:56 PM   #4
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ok peepin GHOST..its taking fo ever to buffer here...lol
ok its playing now...no no no...LOSE the echo....u gotta do like dude who replied be4 me said...emphasise the lines more...sound like u mean it...put some emotions toto NOT sound monotone...don;t sound like u juss talkin fast on a beat..
record more and u should get better
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