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Old 07-03-02, 03:31 AM   #1
DeNihil
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read n' rate please

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Apocalypse occurs when I'm openin my lips,
After listening you'll know this is as good as it gets,
So what you got for me, friend or enemy?
You better let it be, you don't want no beef with me.
I'm the baddest rap addict combatant you'll battle with,
After I'm at it, there'll be nothing left to fight against,
You know I've got the syllables,the verbs, and the adjectives,
Also I've got the parabols,the metaphors and the setitives,
to put your mind at ease, call me doctor of you please,
DeNihil, I've got style like Pam Anderson's got disease,
So let me set it up for you right now nice and easy,
I'm the best there's ever been but don't dare try to lease me,
I'm not for sale, not for rent,
can't harness my power,I'm just content
to keep on doing this, keep on spittin' this,
How about you just close your mouth shove your fist in it.
D to the N, new neighbors moving in,
none of you can touch this until you've been where I've been.
We're near the end, and almost done, but my career has just begun, so let me see you drop that gun, bow down and admit who's #1.
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Old 07-03-02, 06:57 AM   #2
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i'd give a 7 outta ten for it the volcab could be upped used a lot of the same rhyming words kinda good to mix it up but besides that being my only beef this was a good peice
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