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Old 05-11-04, 01:11 AM   #1
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This is a diss I did to someone named ShadyPimp.. got banned for biting 8 mile... Its not my best but its good enough for a free agent thread...


Shady commin back on so many alias' its got my head in a whirl
From Messiah to Eye Dol Eyes dont be mad Shady im sorry Wink fucked yo girl
IM'd me sayin "hey check my beats, aint they neat, I swear to you im truely streets"
"I took things literal cause I actually BEAT my meat" Shady you bein here is pointless like shoes.... with no feet
"wait I cant battle yet, please I need an extension" I have to wait til 8 Mile part two comes out and not to mention
I havnt posted enough threads yet to get these peoples attention, "But when B Rabbit comes back imma get my redemtion"
Stop, Rewind, we gotta keep this in mind, Why battle shady when hes not usin his own lines?
2 bars of someone elses rhymes, hes puttin against four lines that are actually mine
Uh oh shady your out of time, I didnt think it could get much worse and, When hes spittin a FAMOUS verse and
Hes talkin bout he hasnt tried to dispure on, anything ill but its hard to believe cause his crew consists of 6 heads... all the same person
Uh oh he wont reply watch him duck now, Cause if all of UF is tell this kid that he sucks how
the fuck his he still here? WILL THE REAL SLIM SHADY PLEASE STAND UP... not so fast shady... sit the FUCK down
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Old 05-11-04, 08:46 AM   #2
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come join Tha Killas
we can both help each otha elavate
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Old 05-11-04, 08:49 AM   #3
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How can your bars be so amazingly stretched, and still say nothing?
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Old 05-11-04, 09:57 AM   #4
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^^^ You werent on the site so you dont understand the personals bra
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Old 05-11-04, 10:00 AM   #5
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Yeah, I get da personals, but those bars are way too stretched, you should try to get your punches and personals across wit an even flow. No beef, just constructive criticism.

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Old 05-11-04, 11:20 AM   #6
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True, thanks
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