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Old 04-05-05, 01:49 AM   #1
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S-large ft. Night-Crawla aka Debit aka etc. - High With Me

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yo check this track out, it's been done for a while but i just finally left feedback on two tracks, i'm expecting people to say i suck and this and that so i'm expecting the haters but to those who i have no beef with...leave some honest feedback...

S-large - hook and most of track
Nightcrawla (me)- featured mc...2nd verse
quality is ok...should be getting a new mic tomorrow

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Old 04-05-05, 01:55 AM   #2
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OK i'm peepin this now.....the beats cool....too repetitive...the first dudes got a generic voice.....his flows ok......quality's horrible i can hear him breathing...shoulda had better EQ ....the chorus is cool....shoulda put more emotion in tho..then it'd be pretty tight.....second guy....ya style is tight...feeling it.....flows cool....ya got good candence..mixings ok.....you did a cool job.......again hook is cool..but more emotion woulda made it better........this is a ok song....the second person is what makes it somewhat enjoyable......6.5/10 only if the first guy woulda had better quality and emotion.....
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Old 04-05-05, 01:58 AM   #3
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thanks...uppin for more feed
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Old 04-05-05, 02:02 AM   #4
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Old 04-05-05, 02:57 PM   #5
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uppin for more feedback people

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Old 04-06-05, 12:51 AM   #6
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Listening to song right now... The beats okay.. I don't really like it much cuz its not my type... The first verse is okay.. sounds like first emcee is bored while he is rappin his lyrics.. so like it seems sorta bored.. the chorus is okay.. but seems sorta dead still.. The second verse is getting better.. This is a verse i'd expect in a south type song.. but once again i don't like these kind of songs.. The 3rd verse is the same as 1st.. just seems pretty dead man.. sorry its okay.. the vocab is way too simple... and what you writtin about is somethin way many have wrote about.. try writtin bout somethin new.. 4/10..
others may like it.. jst ain't my type..
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Old 04-06-05, 01:48 AM   #7
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don't tell me it's simple...i'm the mc who did the 2nd verse...thanks for the feedback fam...uppin for more feed
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Old 04-07-05, 04:10 PM   #8
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