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Old 05-10-03, 05:09 PM   #1
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-==I believe==-

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I believe-
that no matter how good a friend is, they're going to hurt you every once in a while and you must forgive them for that.

I believe-
that just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

I believe-
that true friendship continues to grow, even over the longest distance. Same goes for true love.

I believe-
that it's taking me a long time to become the person I want to be.

I believe-
that you should always leave loved ones with loving words. It may be the last time you see them.

I believe-
that you can keep going, long after you can't.

I believe-
that we are responsible for what we do, no matter how we feel.

I believe-
that either you control your attitude or it controls you.

I believe-
that heroes are the people who do what has to be done when it needs to be done, regardless of the consequences.

I believe-
that money is a lousy way of keeping score.

I believe-
that my best friend and I can do anything or nothing and have the best time.

I believe-
that sometimes the people you expect to kick you when you're down, will be the ones to help you get back up.

I believe-
that sometimes when I'm angry I have the right to be angry, but that doesn't give me the right to be cruel.

I believe-
that maturity has more to do with what types of experiences you've had and what you've learned from them and less to do with how many birthdays you've celebrated.

I believe-
that it isn't always enough to be forgiven by others. Sometimes you have to learn to forgive yourself.

I believe-
that no matter how bad your heart is broken the world doesn't stop for your grief.

I believe-
that just because two people argue, it doesn't mean they don't love each other. And just because they don't argue, it doesn't mean they do.

I believe-
that you shouldn't be so eager to find out a secret. It could change your life forever.

I believe-
that two people can look at the exact same thing and see something totally different.

I believe-
that your life can be changed in a matter of hours by people who don't even know you.

I believe-
that credentials on the wall do not make you a decent human being.

I believe-
that the people you care about most in life are taken from you too soon.


*just bored and just thinking bout what i believe when it comes to a lot of things..u may agee with me or not but thats about it...*
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Old 05-10-03, 05:57 PM   #2
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Pretty good, maybe I'm just complimenting myself but I think I gave you some inspiration for that. Whatever, good stuff I liked it a lot, you're a great poet.
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Old 05-10-03, 06:01 PM   #3
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this was really nice, because it didn't rhyme. I'm sick of things that rhyme. It also kinda inspirational, because alot of what you said looked at the side of shit that we don't normally see.
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Old 05-11-03, 07:28 AM   #4
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I liked it...nicely done...you approached it in a way which is hard to execute...

...and seeing as it was kind of 'off top of your head'...i think it was well written...

...i aint going to give any real critique cos it was written in such a way...so...

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Old 05-11-03, 07:36 AM   #5
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Deep. in the words of Ali G "Madd respect." Keep doin your thing ma.......
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Old 05-11-03, 07:43 AM   #6
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in the words of Ali G "Madd respect."...


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Old 05-11-03, 11:15 AM   #7
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Yo...This was a nice piece.
Each statement was very thought-provoking.
I was feelin it.
True words of wisdom.
Stay up n keep em droppin.
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Old 05-11-03, 10:14 PM   #8
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thanks for the replies....i didnt even know this is goin to be a piece....cuz i know it doesnt rhyme or anything but it DOESNT need to tho but yeah...

uppin!
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Old 05-11-03, 10:37 PM   #9
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Wow, I really liked this one. I just got done reading that cat one so i thought what the hell, maybe this is another funny one. I started reading it and I just agreed with it all. Very good. Like one of the other guys responding said, it gets old reading poems that rhyme all the time. This was like a breath of fresh air
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Old 05-13-03, 11:17 AM   #10
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hehehe....thanks man....glad u appreciate poetry...

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Old 05-13-03, 04:37 PM   #11
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Interesting way of putting your beliefs down.

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Old 05-16-03, 05:21 PM   #12
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my beliefs..thats the bottom line....hehehe


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Old 05-19-03, 04:01 AM   #13
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Re: -==I believe==-

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Quote:
Originally posted by shiznit
I believe-
that money is a lousy way of keeping score.


alot of your belifs are straight probverbs. i wanted to quote many, but this was my favorite. straight blew my back and left me stunned foe a sceond or 2. alot of good work so stay up
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