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Old 05-10-05, 11:19 PM   #1
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Seventhird&Fluidmoon~Part 1

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listen with an open mind..through headphones you can hear little snippets seven thru in....this aint no mainstream minnie mouse shit either....enjoy

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189555
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190079
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Old 05-10-05, 11:45 PM   #2
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Iight shit...

Beat is ill...Lyrics are hot as fuck!! Kruunk ass shit...Hook is hot...U got a nice voice Fluid...Dope shit all around

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Old 05-11-05, 12:04 AM   #3
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Thank you..you know,i really appreciate that,when kids come in with an open mind and listen for something different,other than high pitched annoying voices...i will return the favor bro
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Old 05-11-05, 12:22 AM   #4
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ok seven turn ya vocals up a lil on this quality is decent but your quality sint as good as usual flow is dope as fuck emotion is decent here punches are strong here still dont like fluids singing or the lyrics to this hook no hate just my opion seven you did real nice on this track here second verse is funny as shit you sound like a english dude when you start lmfao hahahahaha this is good though i had this beat before he posted it aint really like it but its o.k overall.seven good drop fluid blah no hate just dont like you on this should have tried something diffrent on the hook maybe seven rapping or some shit7/10
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Old 05-11-05, 12:28 AM   #5
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its ok cali, we dont like you either, you can keep pretending like he does though,its funny
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Old 05-11-05, 07:49 AM   #6
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nice beat
Nice lyrics
Nice multis damn
Nice chorus,but you seem like u dont have the right notes,like it dosint comes out like it should,but still like tho
Second verse is hella dope!

Overall 8/10
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Old 05-11-05, 10:05 AM   #7
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o shyt i have this beat dl, its anna dominia rite? coo... havent heard 73 drop in a minute... good flow i like ya multis, i can tell thats what u aim for... punches are aight.... hmmm for tha chorus i dunno how much im feelin it. you got a real pretty voice gurl, but u a lil off key in parts, make sure to throw in sum different notes.... lol ur second verse is on some straight b boy shyt lol, sum run dmc shyt or sum, at least how it kicks in...like how u finish up ya verse son.... once again tha chorus needs a lil more feeling to it.. u got potential tho nyce voice gurl... lol 73 reminds me tha slightest bit of dzk how he talks lol....i like tha samples in tha thrird verse, it gives off a real nyce vibe, all in all im not let down that i peeped this cuz it was pretty nyce, keep droppin, hope to see you in the tourney man..

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Old 05-11-05, 10:55 AM   #8
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This was a good drop.... your beat was good i really liked the beat.... and your lyrics wasnt that bad either...you had some nice multis in this aswell ... Nice chorus but it
doesnt really fit with the wording ... Second verse was the best i would have to say

if you dont mind could you hit up the first piece i have dropped on the site anit a rap song its me actually singing so yeah hit it up please

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Old 05-11-05, 11:58 AM   #9
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Good Lookin' 7, now lemme do this up. Postin' while listenin'.

Oh shit, intro is g'd son. Fight club is the shit. Later you gonna tell me how you did. Beat is nice. Last week line is funny. BSB shit is funny. Multis like crazy. Fluid got a weird voice, but like in a good way, like it's a different style that sounds good. Chorus is good. Damn, came in hard second verse. you ride the beat wild nice. hearless kidds fold. never sold out shit was nice. beat is really nice. Y'all both doin' a good job on it, lyrics go wit it good. Ad-libs is cool. Damn, I need to get quality like that on my audios. I like this shit alot, there's so much shit goin' on in this song, but the extras aren't brought in sloppily. Shit is nice man. I would bump this, actually ima listen to it again and shit. Nice job on this shit, both of y'all, definately worth gettin' it sent over aim. Keep up the good work y'all two. 845.

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Old 05-11-05, 12:54 PM   #10
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It been awhile i heard Fluid and Seven droppin songs..lol what happened u guys dont like rv anymore.

Seven- nice flow, presence is felt.....work on production a little but overall i liked the 2nd verse...."water"..lol

Fluid- Chorus....sounds kinda like lauren hill or wut is the other girl Jill Scott.....seriously it was cool.....i was feelin the track......
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Old 05-11-05, 10:43 PM   #11
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ay Yo i liked this shizznit i got this beat was thinkin bout doin some shit to it but yall did some justice as always yall two its time for the thirdself reserection
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nice track overall, i started laughing at your 2nd verse but twas pretty good
chorus was ight i think what hurt it is your quality on it fucks with it a little
but nice drop
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Old 05-12-05, 01:18 PM   #13
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listenin..
beat is coo
voice is real tight
flow is fluid and tight
delivery fits the track, nice energy
underground vibe on this
good lyrics also man!
overall a pretty dope track man, hook is also sickk
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Old 05-12-05, 09:11 PM   #14
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return to favor on this link plz..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181447

listening: nice beat..

Verse 1: very nice flow.. lyrics is nice.. and good multi's..

Chorus: Um.. its okay.. no offense.. but u sound too sharp in this chorus.. if u a singer u know wut i mean.. and sorta seems like ur struggling.. n oh. n just noticed some parts in the chorus... ur voice is flat as well..

Verse 2: umm.. same

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