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Old 11-21-07, 11:37 PM   #1
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Old 11-22-07, 03:27 PM   #2
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Page not found. Fix that shit.
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Old 11-22-07, 03:33 PM   #3
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Actually nevermind...I found it.

Okay...

Beat is decent...a little too hyper for me.

Vocal quality is terrible...you sound pretty stuffed up, which in turn, ruins the delivery. You are pretty monotonous to begin with.

Actually, you remind me of when I started recording. Decent lyrics, but off flow terribly. And I think I maybe heard you stutter a few times...if you have to redo a take, it is usually worth it. It will make you sound more professional, and give you some positive points about your track. Practice makes perfect, and perfection is where you want to be. Do you want people to hear you stutter, or hear the perfect track every time they hear it?

Overall, I think you do have a future. But it is a long road, and it won't happen overnight.

Keep doing it man. The worst thing you can do is give up.
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Old 11-22-07, 10:23 PM   #4
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^ Thanks man, I appreciate the feed back, and a long road is what I'm ready to take don't worry about the quality of this track begin in the RV collabo...I've gotten some my of friends to help me out with that...and I know currenty process an Apex Rode Mic ... looks promising lol. buht yeah good looking.
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Old 11-23-07, 04:20 AM   #5
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another thing you could do is just practise randomly like even if it's a song playing on tv just practise spitting your bars to it....before you know it you'll be doing it every opportunity and it's really good for helping yourself to elevate
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Post links to feed back and i'll reopen the thread
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Old 11-24-07, 11:36 PM   #7
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^ you can go ahead and close this. Not really that great to keep open.
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