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ill drop in a few minutes or hours

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yeah yeah im ill!

in..

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Revoke prepare to get Prevoked cause im out to get ya../
i got my 9mili hidin in my sweataa.../
STYLE CHANGE
Fuck! that you aint worth it, your just a bitch hopefull you'll forfeit...../
If not ill have to hit ya with my ill flows and killa blows. your a dike usin dildos/
Im like an hitman slit ya throat, keep ya ass on your toes while im dissin ya flows../
Ohh noo!! here i go.. no stoppin me now mine as well get poppin tha shellz.../
Cause im gonna rip ya son.. fist in ya face and gun to your hun..../
Rob ya of ya shine, dont beg me for it bak bitch cause this battle is MINE../

LoL Good luck

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yeah yeah im ill!

drop i see you onlinee drooopppppp droooooppppp

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yeah yeah im ill!

alright gimme 15-20 mins good luck man

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aaiiight just to let you know i didnt pre write mine i just got on and wrote it.

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yeah yeah im ill!

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lol you know what i forgot to add personals lool oh well uppin ^^^^^^^

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yeah yeah im ill!

loool i wasnt gonna waste good punchlines after i saw your verse
...not my best but blah

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Blah Blah Blah

Closed Battle Revoke Murdered This With ease

Bestline-

next time do like ya avy and call for some help
cuz im destined to rhyme, your just destined to get delt

9/10 Blah...

Worsteline-none

Mc

Bestline-

If not ill have to hit ya with my ill flows and killa blows. your a dike usin dildos/
Im like an hitman slit ya throat, keep ya ass on your toes while im dissin ya flows../

6/10 Blah...

Winner-Revoke

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Aight Mc.Cm yo content wasnt that bad, but your structure was fucked up and most of your punches were weak, try not to stretch your lines so much, you started talkin like 50 cent near the end with all the gun shit, keep it realistic dawg we on the net, try and elevate

Revoke, structure was better, opener was pretty good, stayed consistent throughout the whole verse, had some decent punches, no personals but neitha one of yall had that. Better flow too, came out soundin better, so my vote goes to Revoke

vote=Revoike

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

ok mc co w/e that name is one big problem man enough wit 40's blunts and bitches hip hops moved on its no longer about those 3 things believe it or not u dont have to be shot to be a rap star that said neva eva eva eva eva talk about pullin out 9's and yo nigga i cap yo ass cause its old like i said its moved on its not about fuckin cops in the ass anymore.ok so u had not really any opener or punches or flow and maybe u do this in real life but let me jus tell u these people (textees) on here arent used to doing it in real life so they concentrate on hard punches and somethin called structure so prepare urself cause theyre all experts at puting words w/o a beat get ready or get fucked pretty much wat im sayin.

revoke structure was there opener punches personals everything flow jus no comparison between the two verses

mc change ur name to textee cause this aint ur hood this is words and u gota kno how to use them

v/revoke

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