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07-14-05, 08:45 PM
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Stay out da snow,a blizzards coming
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blackfrostbite vs 4fil
IP: 2811 25F9
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07-14-05, 08:49 PM
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CHRYMESINDICATE
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IP: 0E6C 3AED
Hello..........
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07-14-05, 08:49 PM
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IP: 0E6C 3AED
4fil has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 08:49 PM.
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07-14-05, 08:57 PM
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IP: 2811 25F9
blackfrostbite has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 08:57 PM.
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07-14-05, 09:17 PM
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Stay out da snow,a blizzards coming
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IP: 2811 25F9
yo cuz,leave da block,you a pest in da streets/
killin' you wit dis will be part of 4 fillin my destiny/ yo you ain't a sindicator of crime/ how can you be in da streets plottin' when you can't write a decent rhyme/ look homie im more of a killer dan you need an example/ check out how im makin you commit suicide wit dis one rhyme,and dis ain't even da preamble/ ya life ya gamble,when ya tuoch mics wit me/ cuz what da fight seems to be,will be over within a mintue,better believe me/
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you pay da cost tonite,git back for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite 
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07-14-05, 09:18 PM
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Stay out da snow,a blizzards coming
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IP: 2811 25F9
good luck holmes!!!!!!!!!!!
uuuuuuuuppppppiiiinnnnn post nigga
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you pay da cost tonite,git back for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite
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07-15-05, 01:06 AM
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IP: 0E6C 3AED
If you dont get punches............. don't vote
 *Ahem The boys running and hiding.......... as if Will-a-peer just kissed him With a Record of 1-0........... the only person he beat was the system Fucked up ugly, slimey and beat.......... Yeah i'm talking bout your head I'll make this pussie bloddy........... and i'm winning this battle period The only time your dope......... is when you put those drugs into effect It's in his name to bite........... and the coward went and stole my accept It must have been cold when you got frostbite.. and actually quite scary seeing this ugly fruit around believing somebody's gonna pop his cherry All honest votes will be returned....................
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07-15-05, 01:08 AM
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IP: 0E6C 3AED
Nice drop man....... Uppin for votes!
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07-15-05, 01:11 AM
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(X) CeEding all Expectations
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IP: 5A50 DAC7
Voted For: 4fil
The boys running and hiding.......... as if Will-a-peer just kissed him With a Record of 1-0........... the only person he beat was the system ^^^^^^^ good opener fil but didnt you already use this line 1nce before...any wayz great opener Fucked up ugly, slimey and beat.......... Yeah i'm talking bout your head I'll make this pussie bloddy........... and i'm winning this battle period ^^^^^^ haahah good werd play..but i think you used this line as well before... ahh dunno It must have been cold when you got frostbite.. and actually quite scary seeing this ugly fruit around believing somebody's gonna pop his cherry ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lmfao..... good stuff here fil ... good wer play overall vote has to go 2 fil he takes this out wit ease..... Frost you wack.... nuff said.. Fil took this overall wit Punches. ..lol which were hard pretty good flow and structure.. aiight vocab... << but you could wrk on it and get way better... good stuff fil...
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07-15-05, 01:13 AM
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Voted For: 4fil
flow-4fil personals-neither punches-4fil multis-4fil structure-4fil enjoyment-4fil creativity-4fill fav line The only time your dope......... is when you put those drugs into effect It's in his name to bite........... and the coward went and stole my accept this battle was onesided IMO but both of ya keep doing what ya doing and stay up vote-4fill r/f or this vote will be removed(explain your vote ok) http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=199762 |
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07-15-05, 01:16 AM
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(x)eed what you saying bout using those lines before?
I'm pretty sure that they are original cause i just freestyled this here and now....
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07-15-05, 01:28 AM
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(X) CeEding all Expectations
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IP: 5A50 DAC7
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my bad ..... sorry aiight...
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07-15-05, 01:31 AM
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GeNeRaL
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4fill your gonna vote on that link i put when i voted cause it will be appreciated if you vote and vote honestly aight fam............~1~
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07-15-05, 07:18 AM
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(X) CeEding all Expectations
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IP: 5A50 DAC7
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ man... thnx 4 votin aiight... agreed on my battle and his..but stop askin peepz to like forcefully vote on ur battle
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07-15-05, 07:45 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 9419 3D1C
Voted For: 4fil
yo cuz,leave da block,you a pest in da streets/ killin' you wit dis will be part of 4 fillin my destiny/ ^^That nice to know ya wanna kill him & all....but where da punch? yo you ain't a sindicator of crime/ how can you be in da streets plottin' when you can't write a decent rhyme/ ^^^basic and stretched out look homie im more of a killer dan you need an example/ check out how im makin you commit suicide wit dis one rhyme,and dis ain't even da preamble/ ^^^stretched out and whack ya life ya gamble,when ya tuoch mics wit me/ cuz what da fight seems to be,will be over within a mintue,better believe me/ ^^just stop......... Lmao...this verse was horrible.I mean....for starters.U didn't have any punches or flow.U ain't got either one....you lost.Learn not to stretch your lines.Make them even.Get some wordplay and metas.And stop glorifing yourself....just diss the other guy man.Plus get rid a that newb structure. The boys running and hiding.......... as if Will-a-peer just kissed him With a Record of 1-0........... the only person he beat was the system ^^OK......but not really all that hot Fucked up ugly, slimey and beat.......... Yeah i'm talking bout your head I'll make this pussie bloddy........... and i'm winning this battle period ^^^1st line was good...but period lines are played.Didn't rhyem though The only time your dope......... is when you put those drugs into effect It's in his name to bite........... and the coward went and stole my accept ^^^Set up nice....but punch lacked It must have been cold when you got frostbite.. and actually quite scary seeing this ugly fruit around believing somebody's gonna pop his cherry ^^^OK........... U raped the other guy in bassically every catergory.Verse wasn't a masterpeice.....but still way better than other guy's one.Every bar had some sort of wordplay.....which is really good.Next time try to add up a few personals.Get some decent concepts as well.Like that period shit....played.Got good stucture....but make every bar rhyme next time. Vote-4fil VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR VOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199977 |
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