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not bad. i think the bass would be better using a different sound, and maybe use a crisper snare but ovrall it was good.

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higher or lower bass?

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that was pretty tight dawg --- i think the bass is fine it just needs to the volume lowered a bit and it would blend perfect --- anyway keep at it dawg

it's iiight

lower the bass, and could prolly find a different snare

but da track is too repetitive, it's da same shit over and over, so it made it get boring real fast

6.5/10

keep makin beats and get better at it

hmm, listened to Godfather

it's better than Dark Temple

i liked em violins........nice work

but yo, here's what u should, turn down the volume on the kicks and snares a lil bit, try and do that, it would make it sound much better

but i liked it, da violins

but yo, u dont have to do this all the time but try and make da beat changes up where a hook should be

7.5/10

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potential, doesnt sound like its finished, but it got potential

u should do more shit to that beat

and p.s. i see u have like "Ill sell u this for...."

if u selling beats online, u either should cut da track real short or do some voice overs on the shit cuz honestly, lol i dont need the "free mp3 download" to steal ur beats, all i have to do is play it lololol so im helpin u out, when u makin more beats, put voice overs

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but ya feelin God father more

yeah I like this and a few others too *head bouncing*

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