Vocals were a little too loud. Maybe you were just a little close to the mic or something. Flow was OK, but it sounded like you had to wait up for the beat a few times. Chorus didn't really sound like a chorus at first....needs work on quality. Actually, the quality could have been better across the whole track. Chorus sounded better after the second verse.....did you do two takes of it? Some of your emphasis' were off beat. Last line didn't really rhyme with anything......if you're gonna end after the beat stops, you should end with something very tight and worded very well. Keep dropping

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