man what the fuck Im failing in school,
this aint kool, my brain is overflowin... Its FULL,
can't cram anymore work into my head,
not doin' my work just sleepin' Instead,
only class that Im easily passin' Phys Ed,
english teacher bitchin bout what the sub said,
just cauz he called me a smartass Then I flipped,
late to classes gettin in trouble, more than pink slipped,
mom told me that Teacher was a bitch I agreed,
But shit I gotta pass 8th grade to succeed,
I gotta go to college, today we had freshman orientation,
sayin' kids are the future but were all part of this nation,
rap radio stations, in my head I here the music,
teacher yellin' at me n Im hearin Eminem... must of confused it,
this dont conclude it, I really gotta pull up these grades,
If I want anything In life, I cant be afraid...
if skool was more fun I'd of payed some attention,
instead of always endin' up gettin' detentions,
fucking bitch skool can suck my fucking cock,
dont let us out until damn 3 o clock,
5th and 6th get out 30 mins before us,
that shit is whack... then we gotta wait half hour for da bus,
slow mother fuckers needa learn to drive,
o well sucks for now at least Im alive...

Hook-
wtf im failin n skool Im not to bright,
today wus pretty kool tho there wus a good fight,
but fuck that right now i need stay on track,
If I wanna graduate, then I really can't Slack,
watch my back... I got friends help me through,
but when it comes to the end... Im just like all of you,

Of my yeah my mom used to be proud,
that wus until I started fuckin' around,
she says she still is but I doubt it...,
I wanna pass skool.... she says I don't care about it...,
but I do and i dont wanna make her upset,
If I dont fuckin' pass its somethin I'll regret,
I don't wanna fucking go through it again,
mom says If i fail... military skool where Im bein' sent,
But I love my mom and I can't let her down,
I better do my homework... or my ass is Hell bound,
I want my new cellphone... but I needa get A's B's n C's,
Insetad of givin' her report cards wit Fuck you's and D's,
I hope I can do this i hate algebra 1~!...,
pain in my fucking ass, no it aint fun,
but sooner or later all of this shit'll Be done,
Im startin' to pass I feel so damn good,
I can pull and A or B and I think that I should,
good grades in classes... I never thought I could,
fuck spanish I cant even pass english,
my hopes n dreams of grades.... distinguished...
just hand me the hose to put my self out,
i wus never on fire... don't no what Im bout,
no choice for me... but I know I can do it...
haha... you can do anything, just put yo mind TO IT!

Hook-
wtf im failin n skool Im not to bright,
today wus pretty kool tho there wus a good fight,
but fuck that right now i need stay on track,
If I wanna graduate, then I really can't Slack,
watch my back... I got friends help me through,
but when it comes to the end... Im just like all of you,

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SyaNidal \v/ Diverse

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Flow - nice stayed on track the whole way through, only noticed one line off:
I don't wanna fucking go through it again,
mom says If i fail... military skool where Im bein' sent,

Vocab - adequate

Concept - nice story, stayed on point the whole way through.

Overall - 7

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