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03-29-07, 01:27 PM | #1 | |||
I Hurt.
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5. Wireless (4-3) vs. 6. tiggobitties (2-1)
IP: 2AC9 5FB1
G.B.A Gimmick Battle Association March Madness Battles You will be assigned a school that participated in March Madness. The goal of this battle is to diss your opponent's school with basketball related punches. However, you may also throw non-basketball related punches at your opponent's school if you choose to. Good Luck. ============ Wireless - Tennessee Volunteers vs. tiggobitties - Vanderbilt Commodores ============ Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific 10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = -2 Votes Swaying = DQ Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Wednesday Night New Battles Up Thursday Morning For Full Rules Click Here |
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03-30-07, 05:59 PM | #2 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 9EFF 743A
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3155397
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3155398 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3155401 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...073#post3155073
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04-02-07, 06:24 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 82DE 174C
uhm...i thought i signed out
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04-02-07, 06:24 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 82DE 174C
o well ill drop sumthin ne wayz
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04-02-07, 06:25 PM | #5 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 32B8 F76B
Nope, u didn't. Why don't you at least write a quick 10 lines for this and you can signout after that so you don't no-show
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04-02-07, 09:13 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 82DE 174C
thats alright...i was just signin out for spring break but now its over so sall good
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04-02-07, 09:53 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 82DE 174C
u cant beat us now and you never could
lets "face" it every one "sleeps while your dribbling"... .........cuz your no good* u from tennesee you dont just play wit ya fam... ........on the court yall incest, accordin to ya sig you the best.... .......at the wrong sport we aint got flow? cmon we the commodores.... .....born in the sea and ya cant be wireless cuz everyone in tennessee..... .....is still stuck wit black and white t.v. anyone can tell were better by our alphabetical stats sure T comes before V but isnt the best saved for last u not on my level...couldnt reach my "rim" with a stilt and this is my house you used to "rv"..... .....but now you in the "VAN-we-BILT"** *people dribble or droll on their face when they sleep **rv/van...get it? |
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04-02-07, 10:04 PM | #8 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 9EFF 743A
lollllllll
tennessee, we're known for running the gridirons and courts while vanderbilt.. yall are known for being fucking dorks our coach is the shit, dont fuck with us, dummies only pearls you guys touch are all your schools fucking money dont fuck wit ya boys, we on a whole notha dimension gotta add a T to the V for yalls asses to even get attention chris?he's a verb.. we'll lofton yall's weak ass... while vandy.. lofton.. s of fucking shots that never hit the glass look at your tounry finish.. G'town smoked yall its about time yall 3 and oute'd something besides football
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04-02-07, 10:07 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 82DE 174C
lol at both of our T and V lines... gluck
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04-02-07, 10:10 PM | #10 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 9EFF 743A
my bad didnt even read ur verse
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04-02-07, 10:15 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: 82DE 174C
sall good i aint mean it like that........
links http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3154717 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3154719 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3154721 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3154727 Last edited by tiggobitties : 04-02-07 at 10:44 PM. |
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04-03-07, 07:13 AM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: 0E7B 7284
u from tennesee you dont just play wit ya fam...
........on the court yall incest, accordin to ya sig you the best.... .......at the wrong sport we aint got flow? cmon we the commodores.... .....born in the sea and ya cant be wireless cuz everyone in tennessee..... .....is still stuck wit black and white t.v. vss tennessee, we're known for running the gridirons and courts while vanderbilt.. yall are known for being fucking dorks our coach is the shit, dont fuck with us, dummies only pearls you guys touch are all your schools fucking money dont fuck wit ya boys, we on a whole notha dimension gotta add a T to the V for yalls asses to even get attention Got Wireless takein it wit 1 more quoteablethat I liked... V// Wireless |
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04-03-07, 11:01 AM | #13 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 2AC9 5FB1
u from tennesee you dont just play wit ya fam...
........on the court yall incest, accordin to ya sig you the best.... .......at the wrong sport vs. our coach is the shit, dont fuck with us, dummies only pearls you guys touch are all your schools fucking money chris?he's a verb.. we'll lofton yall's weak ass... while vandy.. lofton.. s of fucking shots that never hit the glass Really up and down battle, the 3 lines I quoted were all solid quotables, real nice, but everything else I read was ehh. Tiggo, u reallllly gotta fix ur structure. With doin' the ... thing, u can do that for a punchline, but never do that for a setup. Do it more like this Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah ... ... blah blah blah Ur way is confusing and hurts the flow of the diss. Ur sig diss was nice, but everything else was either played or forced. The fact that u had to explain some of ur shit shows that, u should never explain punches. If they don't make sense without u explaning it, they're no good. Wireless, u had a few nice nameplays with the Lofton and Bruce Pearl thing. Everything else u had I felt was kinda basic. Like the opener and closer. They're dorks, that coulda been about anyone. So could the 3 and out thing. You had a few cool lines though and didn't come as forced so u got this. Vote - Wireless |
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04-04-07, 09:22 PM | #14 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: 225B 11A9
u from tennesee you dont just play wit ya fam...
........on the court yall incest, accordin to ya sig you the best.... .......at the wrong sport [vs] our coach is the shit, dont fuck with us, dummies only pearls you guys touch are all your schools fucking money chris?he's a verb.. we'll lofton yall's weak ass... while vandy.. lofton.. s of fucking shots that never hit the glass VOTE = WIRELESS |
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04-05-07, 12:24 AM | #15 | ||||
Fuck Parents
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IP: 6D21 AB67
wow, i really didnt see any quotables. seems wireless either half-assed or rushed his verse while tb had no structure whatsoever. not to mention he had horrible wording so....
v/ wireless
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