that bitch is so fly
but why try dawgs shes gonna deny
but dont cha wanna get between her thighs
of course the force my dick longer than a horse but that bitch want more more like porsch
shit a porsch of course but i crashed into a herse
i've despersed worst been cursed by bitches on my first verse
they stole the bitches purse but afta that she was put into the back of a herse
like stealing jewels off a corpse im a monkey that stay on the porch
i was smoking and toking on ma porch but we had to use a big fucking torch
flame flameboint so hot i give blisters got u screaming for ointment
shit niggas dont ned ointment we just made an appointment for the flame burns and blisters on ma fingers
i linger wit gods, demons, and an appointment at the welfare office them bitches have got grievence
damn...that shits wack niggas smoke crack
no food stampscim phiending
but we dont need bitches wanting up the crack
feel the blood flowing through my veins adrenaline makes me make people go insane
cuz thats wack what crakc does its so fucking wack
fuck smoking crack i slang packs and tap dance on the backs of insane maniacs
insane maniacs they smoking crack but they come back in black and hit the sack
cannablism twisted isms giving my rhythem im still sinning with da syndacate real living
living on the streets fuck up ma teeth when i it the concrete
face pavment face 2 face facing the side of the curb tasting
it tatse like dirt, im feeling kinda hurt im think imma go toe to toe with the next nigga that wants a piece of this
i roll with gat clappers i smack rappers you fudge packer n im white n u aint killin no god damn crackers
fuck the crackers ma name is phatmasterflip and im looking for a fight
despite spite i light mics n display hype give a spark of energy to any emcee whos fucking white
black is nice but i dont wanna despite ma color cuz im white i dont wanna despite ma type
what our type is the niceness im priceless just watch me fucking type this
ight i will watch u type this cuz u aint nothing but a punk ass bitch
fuck outa face your a disgrace to pale race gimpy motherfucker cant keep up with ma pace
shit nigga i got ma own pace that i put to ya disgrace and u trying to fuck up the program
shit u funny acting like a dummy cuz u want ya mommy...............

you're delivery is a little off and you should try to stay away from repeating the same words too much..you can get away with it if the words are placed right...but overall its ok..just keep elavatin..theres a lot of talent on this site..

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let's get this shit straight, i'm here to eliminate- them squadz wit feminine traits, there's no escape!

i like cookies

ight word up

just post this in Open Mic

you will get real feeback there

BUT READ THE RULES BEFORE ANYTHING

That Sucked...There Was Like Zero Consistent Topic in This

Here's A2Z's Guidelines To Elevations

1. Use More Multis, Wordplay, Vocab And Rhythm
2. Continue Elevation

If Thats Dosent Work

1. Hang Yourself.

...I Aim To Please ...

LMAO. The dude just now PM'd me asking if I wanted to battle. lol, oh geez kids.

are u kidding me this is my first rap here im sry if i suck now but thats ok all good rappers suck in the beginning

and ya i do want a fucking cookie

dipshit you could have just posted this in open mic

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^^But Not Saying That Was More Fun.

i was going to delete the freeposts and move it to open mic but no.

why didnt u move this c-section?