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11-04-04, 12:38 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Some Street Stuff
IP: 005F B7E2
Some Street Stuff
The beast smart so I write a piece of art about him while I feast in the dark but had to increase the Cutty Sark wild Gave up smoking now crave corrupt hoping to kick this Sick habit I still have a wig scar from a cigar a slick twist Like an actress voice my affair got mattress made of horsehair It don’t give much live to touch it at night breathe good choice of air On streets exchange blows with strange foes get knocked down In a hot round in a dispute over drug stuff pollute thugs and bop clowns The crisis will pass after an ill blast of truth and proof Of improvement, stress mingles and mess up shingles on the roof See crap that make cats elapse on spot even with strong plot Lot of wrong slop go down in the street rather you home or not Hood is a place for habitation it could disgrace and grab a nation So I’m on the run have to duck lead or get struck in the head situation Of death exist or permanent damage, but manage so far with information Proper location gets hotter inflation price of ROCAWEAR Cause shock everywhere so I put on my pants try dance here and there Don’t have a perfect or great mind but I circulate rhymes that Devastate spines other words educate like Einstein in a fine hat Thunder flow and friction undergo transition hitting the community Like a fitting opportunity so come on board yall gitting puny |
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11-04-04, 02:24 PM | #2 | ||||||
...Jea...
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IP: 28AD 5545
it was ok, but needed work.....6/10....you should try to work on your flow and wordplay...this piece could be killa if you worked on it alot....also work on staying on topic
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11-04-04, 03:08 PM | #3 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
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IP: 6CEA 0327
eastcoast said it best.it wasn't bad tho'.........
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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11-05-04, 08:55 AM | #4 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 005F B7E2
thanks for thepropsand critiques
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11-05-04, 09:31 AM | #5 | |||
Banned
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IP: EFEB C28B
nice drop yet again.. flow was smoth, it seems like a freestyle so it aint bad at all creativeness was good multis nice...
8.0 outta 10... V.T is for u mang holla at me... |
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11-06-04, 11:05 AM | #6 | ||||||
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The hate has widen in scope cats riding on coke like
IP: 005F B7E2
The hate has widen in scope cats riding on coke like
Drug addicts, thug static everywhere not even a boat float right On waters of destruction, borders of corruptions surrounds towns Want greater powers and straighter towers they all lopsided Foundation crumbling got a nation stumbling with the slop provided By a political party a critical body of people for decision making But religion taking the heart of America in part and character |
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