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01-10-04, 09:49 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Jay-O Anthem!!! IM BACK, BITCHES!!!
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...902#post1074902 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...898#post1074898 Iight... ... Lets Get Into This... Just A Lil' Anthem Type Thing, Yah'Mean... ... Lettin' Dudes Know Whats Really Good And How I Gets Down... But Anyway... ... Here's The Link... www.soundclick.com/jayo Title: Jay-O Anthem ... Listen, Enjoy, And Drop Some Feed-Back... - Jay-O |
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01-10-04, 10:09 PM | #2 | ||||||
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JAY-O ANTHEM is dope dawg...Good hook....good vibe...good performance..i like that beat -sounds dangerous...
I DIDNT WANNA SAY GOODBYE..thats some ill shit...keepin the lyrics street but the beat is mad radio-frendly with a rugh edge..dope performance ...I`ll download that one... ROUND HERE...good beat...i like the little synthlines and the arrangement..This shit is dope again..... Peace |
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01-10-04, 11:04 PM | #3 | ||||||
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Yo Good Lookin', Man...
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01-11-04, 12:11 AM | #4 | ||||
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I'm typing while I'm listening to it..
the beat is good..but I dont like how your voice sounds..dont like the hood..not at all..like the sex with strangers line..you got a harlem juelz santana style..the ass cheek line was golden..lol..once again..the chorus sucks ass..you need to up yo vocabulary..alot..I've heard..Jay-o/yo/tho/dough/ a million times..and the sounds effects sound a lil more clearer than your voice..but it's tight though..
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01-11-04, 09:25 AM | #5 | ||||||
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01-11-04, 01:25 PM | #6 | ||||||
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homie i think your voice sounds tight...beat was sick, rhymes were pretty tight, but i agree with Dixie that ya need to up ya vocab, once you do that - shit dawg i can see big tings happenin for ya - no bullshit.
PS - your rhymes on "round here" & "Milkshake" were tight as hell. |
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01-11-04, 01:49 PM | #7 | ||||||
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i feel tha voice and flow....... good punches... you flowin slower than i would expect on this beat.... quality is ass like one butt cheeck.. you should be rippin this fast........ i dunno. i like ya style..
until next time fam JAY- OOOOOOOOOOOOOO |
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01-11-04, 03:26 PM | #8 | ||||||
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Good Lookin', Y'all...
... Yeah, My Quality Is Ass... This Fuckin' 5 Dollar Labtec Is All I Got Tho'... ... Gotta Work Wit' What I Got, Yah'Mean... But Yeah, If You Willin' To Make A Donation To The "Jay-O Needs A New Mic" Foundation, It'd Be Appreciated... ... HaHa... Thanx Again... ... UPPIN'!!! |
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01-14-04, 03:32 PM | #9 | ||||||
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Can A Muhfucka Get Some Love???
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01-14-04, 08:43 PM | #10 | ||||||
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Jay-O Anthem
"Listening...Beat is mad crazy. Chorus is nice, original, catchy. Emotion is there. Lyrics are clean -n- point. Quality is decent but could of been better. Needed to turn up the vocals in your verse a little more. Vocals sound little muffy. Didn't like the end how you had that toilet effect. Should of just had the beat playing -n- fade at the end. Overall it a nice track." SCORE: 8/10
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01-14-04, 08:46 PM | #11 | ||||
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you need a bit better quality...other that that dope, i was feeling your punches
your flow was kinda of slow Good Peice Peace |
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01-14-04, 08:47 PM | #12 | ||||
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Can you do me a favor and check my song out..I took the time you should too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106893 Thank You. Much Appriciated |
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01-14-04, 10:17 PM | #13 | ||||||
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beat is nice... flow was so slow, words to stretched, a lil to mainstream for me... quality sucked though... but overall its an ok track..
return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106350
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01-15-04, 06:39 PM | #14 | ||||||
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this shit is definitely a banger, good flow; goes perfect wit tha beat....its all on point, wish i coulda listened to it on hi-fi but my broke ass still got dial-up, lol....stay up dogg...pz
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01-16-04, 02:59 PM | #15 | ||||||
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